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Jul 11, 2006 12:31

the world moves on its own ( Read more... )

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littlewashu July 11 2006, 19:48:16 UTC
This is awesome!

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king_kai July 12 2006, 19:45:18 UTC
wow, thank you!

don't tell anyone, but the lava stuff was inspired by the Anakin/Obi-Wan lightsaber battle at the end of Episode III, which i was watching the other night. man, that is so pathetically nerdy...

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littlewashu July 14 2006, 19:59:18 UTC
Not as nerdy as instructing me on Chewbaca's childhood in the middle of Bonnaroo!

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grapenut July 12 2006, 21:06:27 UTC
Man, the imagery - "ancient hulking skeletons".

I really like this poem and for some reason, the ending of the second line really grabs me. Each line really pulls you to the next.

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