Love's Not Time's Fool Part I Ch.9

Nov 13, 2013 07:58

                        
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guavejuice November 13 2013, 13:56:33 UTC
“I have any number of choice comments to your riddle, but given the occasion and the company, none are socially acceptable.”
Loooved that line!!! So Brian.
Thank you so much for a brilliant update by dear Kin.
*hugs*
V.

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kinfic2 November 14 2013, 02:11:43 UTC
*g* Thanks, V!When I wrote it I could truly see Brian saying that line! Thanks so very much for continuing to read, hon! I really appreciate it! *hugs back*

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shadownyc November 13 2013, 15:01:45 UTC
I love the building tension and can't wait for more!

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kinfic2 November 14 2013, 02:15:14 UTC
*sigh* Thanks, hon! I'm having a crisis of talent right now, so knowing that you liked this chapter is a great help!

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predec2 November 13 2013, 20:12:25 UTC
Hi, Kin! You really are such an amazing writer. I do love your lyrical writing style, and how well you write them IC. I hope by "end of part one' that you will be continuing this soon. And I appreciate how you have fleshed out some new characters. That is always one of my pet peeves when a writer cannot go outside the box of main characters on the show and create new ones to fill out a story. You have done that so well.

Love reading anything you write! Thank you for the update. *Hugs* ~Kim

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kinfic2 November 14 2013, 02:19:30 UTC
Thanks, Kim, for "You really are such an amazing writer" *sigh* I honestly don't agree but thank you. I do enjoy introducing new characters into a fic, particularly if the general theme is in canon. Thank you again for all of your support and comments. It means a lot. *hugs back*

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predec2 November 14 2013, 02:29:33 UTC
You're kidding me, right? I wish I could write as lyrically as you do. The way you describe things is amazing, like this part:

"But objectivity could also be a curse, at least about Brian. Because to truly understand him-his thoughts, actions, motives-you had to know the past. Otherwise, opinions would skate across ice without scratching the surface." I love your metaphors that you use.

I have no idea why you would doubt yourself, but you just get that out of your head right now, Missy.;) I for one that you're very talented. Okay, now that you have a swelled head (like Brian - ha!), my work is done. Off to bed, now. Looking forward to the next part. *Hugs* ~Kim

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kinfic2 November 14 2013, 02:37:47 UTC
*sigh* I truly am not kidding you. This chapter was a bitch to write but I don't know why. I re-wrote and revised it more times than I can count. Thank you again, hon, so very much for all of your support. "swelled head"? God, I wish! *hugs*

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later2nite November 13 2013, 21:59:47 UTC
Oh, you saved my heart just in time! The melancholy feel toward the end of this chapter was tearing me apart.

I'm so anxious to get to part 2 now. This is an excellent story, Kin!

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kinfic2 November 14 2013, 02:25:38 UTC
*g* When it comes to B&J, I refuse to to believe that some how, some way, they will not be together! Thanks so much for reading, my dear! You'll never know how much I appreciate it! *hugs*

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rulisteningbj November 14 2013, 23:24:16 UTC
Every time I read your writing I am so taken away, right there in the scene. Brilliant writing. I hate that they share barbs, I know that they just can't help themselves. I was so afraid Brian would just leave.

Dee Dee

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kinfic2 November 15 2013, 03:34:22 UTC
Oh, thanks so much, Dee Dee, for your lovely comment! That's such a wonderful compliment! It's always a push and pull with the two of them,I think. Thank you for reading, hon, and for leaving feedback. I truly appreciate it!

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