College Essays...

[kindredone]

So, guess what i've been doing all afternoon. Yup, i finally broke down and wrote 'em. And now, because you all love me so much, you get to read them and nitpick them to death :)

What are you waiting for? Have at...

and comments are very much appreciated

Comments

[nickisnotorious]

jennifer... amazing. you told me stuff i never knew about you.

i wish i could write this well.

[kindredone]

aww, nick. weve bonded :) and i can help u with ur essays anytime, dont worry about it.

[elixir_string]

niiiiiiiiice
im a mother fuckin greatest defender
awesome essays jen
:D

[_rollthatdice_]

Jen, you're an amazing writer.
Possibly help me with mine?!:D
Which UCs are you applying to?

"Now I knew that I was making a difference."
I used this in one of my previous essays and ms. poole said it was too cliche and to be more specific about it.

(I think i kept it in, but i expanded a bit on it)
Now I knew that I was making a difference because ________.
You know? it's just ms. poole's suggestion so yeah.

great writes tho :)

[kindredone]

thanks for the suggestion kat :)

im applying to santa cruz, davis, san diego and santa barbara, but sc is my fav.

id be glad to look at urs, just email em to me whenever

[rock_music]

HEYYYY

i've been doing the exact same thing all day!!! except it's 9:46 and i'm only done w/ the 2 short ones...

although, i don't think the short ones are allowed to exceed 200 words at all, are they?

[kindredone]

the paper i had said short ones cut off at 250, the long one at 630. funny thing tho, as is when i put them in the site was fine (its about 1090 or so total), but i tried changing the long one one a bit, added like 15 words and all of a sudden i got the error thing for exceeding the 1000 word limit. i guess the cut off's like 1100 or so.

[rock_music]

...interesting

[persianplaya]

jen is my heroooooo!
<3