Day Nine: Interlude, with Brooms

[peri_peteia]

Title: Interlude, with Brooms
Rating: PG

For: jlh

In which Zuko and Mai make out. In a closet.Zuko wouldn't call the feeling entrapment; not after living through the months after the fall of Ba Sing Se under Azula's psychopathic thumb. That was almost as bad imprisonment, and this entrapment came out of obligation - to his people and to the

Comments

[jill_rg]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! (Pardon my overflow of joy at this.)

[tehlobster]

What a great bedtime story. :D Now I can go to sleep happy!

[jlh]

This is really great! I particularly love how you show Zuko's growing frustration with each paragraph at the start, until you can feel that he's about to burst. When he finally gets with Mai the reader feels his relief along with him. And I adore the way he reacts to her, and this release valve they have with each other. There's so much emotion between them!

Fantastic, thank you so much!