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peri_peteia in kindoflikeyou

Day Nine: The Net

Sep 18, 2008 08:38

Title: The Net
Rating: PG

For: soleil_de_lune

For Zuko and Mai, love is constant bickering and awkwardness, a steady drone of her hundred thousand complaints from morning to night, and because she never complains about him, he tries, always, to please her.
( 1025 words )

fic, round one

Comments 5

jill_rg September 18 2008, 14:35:07 UTC

I love the format. Snapshots of their life. And so heartwarmingly romantic.

echoinautumn September 19 2008, 00:24:14 UTC

I'm so sorry for weird themes, but I love how you took them and made them beautiful and heartwarming. Thank you, thank you, thank you. :)

ruebroadway September 27 2008, 16:11:03 UTC

I love this. My favorite parts were Zuko's morning breath (so realistic) and Zuko's corniness towards the end. This was beautifully written and warms my maiko heart :o)

swan2swan September 30 2008, 05:17:31 UTC

"He cries in his sleep sometimes. She wraps herself around him in hers. Sometimes they wake up making love and don't remember how it happened. It's so nice, though. Neither of them minds."

I came across that line and knew that it was my favorite part of the fic.

Lots of fluff in here. :)

ice_of_dreams September 22 2010, 06:24:24 UTC

awww :) I love the sweetness.