I love the idea of Peter and Jim having a common ground. Smiley sent the right man for the job. I'd love a sequel to this, but your ending is quite moving and good. The dialogue is perfect. You capture their voices so well!
I was quite expecting Peter to answer that the only one he killed so far was himself
*nods* I think that's implied in Jim's response that he should think about it again in twenty years. But Peter himself hasn't quite realized, yet, the damage he's doing to himself. I'm thinking about and desultorily working on a sequel where, among other things, Peter does start to realize it.
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wish I could hug you a bit :(
I was quite expecting Peter to answer that the only one he killed so far was himself :(
Hope you'll write more in this fandom :)
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I was quite expecting Peter to answer that the only one he killed so far was himself
*nods* I think that's implied in Jim's response that he should think about it again in twenty years. But Peter himself hasn't quite realized, yet, the damage he's doing to himself. I'm thinking about and desultorily working on a sequel where, among other things, Peter does start to realize it.
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