Oh, I just found these! Nice work on all of them. Arrggh - seems like everyone gets to play chess with Rush except for Young! And I loved Lisa with the bat-like hearing. And I really enjoyed figuring out that the end of the first one was the beginning dream sequence for "Earth". That was way cool.
Thanks, Shena. Glad you liked them. Yeah, I know the only people that will get that reference will have watched SGU. I wanted to connect this story to Water and Earth.
These were too rushed though, I'm not all that pleased with how the first one came out. It needs editing for cohesiveness. And that's my first ever attempt to write Rush. Not sure about it at all.
In reading this, I'm often reminded why you're one of my favorite authors. You're one of the few people capable of actually writing a story that's not jumping all over the place. Keep up the marvelous job! I just adore you! Mwuah!
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed them. I like flow in stories as well. Although, I'm afraid the first story does jump around a bit. I didn't have time to edit it before posting. Nevertheless, I'm glad these pleased you.
I don't know. But, Eli had made up his mind that he was going to surprise Rush, so I'm certain he gave it his all. Probably sneak attacked Rush. I love that idea for Eli. I'm glad you like the story. It was my first attempt at writing Rush.
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These were too rushed though, I'm not all that pleased with how the first one came out. It needs editing for cohesiveness. And that's my first ever attempt to write Rush. Not sure about it at all.
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