Shelter from the Storm - Part 4 - Bigbang 2010

[kimisgirl]

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Comments

[mulder200]

Wow! That was a powerful story!

Perhaps these two broken souls can help piece each other back together.

[kimisgirl]

Thank you :D so glad you enjoyed it! And I think they well fine the happiness they've started to find for sure! At least that's what the sequel will find out I"m sure haha :D

[kimisgirl]

*snuggles you* thanks honey! I'm glad you enjoyed it and that it doesn't fail completely XD It took a lot of writing lol but I enjoyed it! So much, so glad others like reading it :D

[kimisgirl]

Buts...buts... I like getting mah ego boosted...

:P haha! And thank you :D so much

[castielssamiel]

Wow... my chest got kinda tight and then my face was wet... I think you made me cry...

*holds out cookies and smishes*

My favorite couple-not counting Chris and Steve- and it was sad and sweet and... I don't think I could've been that strong.

I probably would've offed myself too.

[kimisgirl]

Oh my! Don't cry! Then again it is a little sad in parts. But I hope the ending made you smile like it did me!

*noms on cookies*

Thanks for commenting love, means a lot to know folks are liking my work!

[castielssamiel]

Well it was very sad, because I can relate to some of it. But the ending sorta made me smile. Of course it's unrealistic to end something like this with instant marriage but... *shrug* I loved it

[kimisgirl]

Thank you! And yeah, it would have taken a lot more story to get them to the happy ever after stage and have it feel... real. However, if it helps, there will be a sequel to this that will see their relationship develope and the pain and damage from their pasts dealt with and fixed as much as it can be. Their may also be a new family member added at some point in the future too! lol. Thanks for commenting, means a lot.

[earth_heart]

*curls up into a ball and sobs* Oh, that story hurts. It hurts deeply. Because I know what it's like. However, you took something horrible and terrifying and gave it a beautiful ending. Getting over rape is... not an easy thing. It's hard, and there are many set-backs, and you showed that perfectly. Some days are good, and others... you wake up screaming. But if you've got someone that knows what it's like, and cares, then it makes it better.

I love your story. I love it to tiny pieces. You are a wonderful writer, and you pack so much emotion into your words that it brings me to tears. I love the way you introduced your characters, and how you had them interact. It was wonderful, and so many other things I can say, but my hands are shaking too much to write more.

Thank you.

[kimisgirl]

Thank you so much. It means so much to me to know that my writing can touch people and your comment is so wonderful. I wanted to write about something that is so dark and horrible that a lot of people try and look the other way, pretend the stuff in the dark doesn't happen, and I wanted to show that sometimes there is light at the end of it. And that sometimes love and healing can happen. But that it's never easy.

I know this story is a little hard to read, it was very hard to write, but I hope it can touch people who read it. I tried to keep it real, to avoid just throwing in the towel and having the happy ending where everyone is fixed and all is right with the world. By having the final scene, one in which Misha has a set back, it shows that while they are healing together and working on themselves, they aren't there yet. Maybe one day they will be, but it takes time!

Thank you for reading, your thoughts and reactions mean a lot. *hugs*

Kimi

[earth_heart]

I wouldn't have enjoyed it as much if you had 'thrown in the towel'. It's been... god, almost three years... and I still suffer every day. I have set-backs, and panic attacks, and sometimes there's just no way I can be around other people- especially when they fly right up to me like Jared did to Misha. I know how he felt, then. And the parts about them just staying in their rooms? I know how that is. There are days when I just... don't leave the house, and then mom has to come home and comfort me.

I like that you went all-out and showed the dark parts that most people just don't want to see. Life isn't all about sunshine and rainbows, no matter how much people try to make it that way. Horrible shit happens to good people, and they're left to deal with it for the rest of their lives while others stroll on merrily. The fact that you would write a story about it is just absolutely wonderful, even if it is heartbreaking at the same time.

*hugs back tightly*

[kimisgirl]

Thank you for your comments, and I'm sorry that you ever had to go through something like that. I am proud you have the strength to keep going and to talk about it. It is so important to talk I think. I'm glad my fic helped express some of the darkness going through things like that holds. Thank you

*hugs*

[tinypinkmouse]

I don't quite know what I should say. I love the story and I've been quietly crying all the way through reading it. Even the hopeful, kind of happy bits are still so sad. I just love the quiet, sad mood of the story and the fact that there's hope despite of it.

I'd try to say more, but I'm starting to cry again. Thank you for a wonderful story.

[kimisgirl]

Oh my! Thank you for reading and commenting, I'm sorry it made you cry! I did want it to moving, I just didn't think about the possibility of it being so upsetting. I'm glad you enjoyed it your comment means a lot. Thank you!

[tinypinkmouse]

Well it's not a bad kind of crying. :) I can react rather strongly to things I read, probably more than I do to things in RL. So, yes kind of upsetting, but in a good way.

[kimisgirl]

I'm glad it was a good way lol :D and thanks again!