Like Fools: Chapter Eleven

[kimberry531]

Title: Like Fools
Author: Kimberry531/Clandestinelle (same person)
Rating: R
Pairing: Al/Scorpius
Word Count: 52,207 total; ~5k this chapter.
Summary: In the middle of his quest to find and master the Elder Wand which his father didn’t want, Al finds his family in the midst of a second Wizarding war. While in hiding, Al finds himself struggling to

Comments

[3ngel]

:o Perfect ending!
it has been a long time since I read a fanfiction that was sooo damned good. And it has a plot! xD A real and exciting plot!
That would be enough to love it but I like the way you write and how you gave personality to the characters.
It was pure joy to read ^-^

Thank you for that!
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[kimberry531]

haha thank you so much for being such an awesome and faithful reviewer! i've appreciated your responses every week! =)

[fauxpersonae007]

I'm so glad everything ended so well. Lovely story, really made me remember why I love AS/S!

[lillianone]

Lovely ending for such a lovely story

XD @ Chopped liver
Thanks for writting this *bows*

[nyokichan]

Soooo fucking fantastic! Best AS/S story I've read in forever. Somehow to me the AS/S fandom has lacked something. Other fics never went quite deep enough into the AS/S relationship. But this had that and more. Great to see some real adventurous drama!

Oh and all AS/S puns are mostly intended, I'm just immature enough that they make me giggle.

[xpectopatronads]

I'm kind of gobsmacked this only has five comments on it, its one of my most favouritist AS/S fics of all time, and one of the two I re-read every now and then (I bow my head in shame at only commenting now, I'm a long time lurker in LJ).

So much love for this fic. I can't write my favourite parts because you can't fit that much in the comment - you win at writing boys, and families, and action, and humour and all of it.

I hope you haven't given up writing.

ETA: I figured out what it was that I loved the most - the UET. So many het stories have unresolved sexual tension, and its delightful and keeps people coming back for more and yowling when it never gets anywhere. I love slash more because I'm a dirty perv and prefer unresolved emotional (or communication?) tension. This story has this in spades. They mess around, but they don't talk about it forever because A) they are boys and B) Albus is a wee bit of a tool. <3.