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femme_slash_fan October 22 2015, 18:19:56 UTC
Oh dear, poor Brienne.

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killing_kurare October 22 2015, 21:25:08 UTC
Ikr :/

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crookedspoon October 25 2015, 16:36:15 UTC
Oh, that is very haunting. I love what you've done with this. The last sentence especially is harrowing. Poor Brienne. This is what she gets from being a dutiful knight.

Psst. Sorry if I'm overstepping, but if I may: it should be "feeds off," double f, and "kind of soggy" - kinda is a colloquial contraction and doesn't fit with the setting ;D

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killing_kurare October 25 2015, 17:54:44 UTC
Of course you may!! Always tell me if I make mistakes <3 suggestions for improvement are love :D

And thank you for the comment <3 Glad you liked it ^^

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crookedspoon October 28 2015, 16:47:22 UTC
Ah, I'm so glad. I'm hesitant to nitpick, because it might seem like I'm putting you on the spot, but I figure you wouldn't want people to politely ignore your typos for years to come. Whenever I read an older fic and there are typos in there, I despair, because WHY DID NOBODY TELL MEEE?! So sad.

Oh, btw, your linklist suggests you're German, so I wanted to admit to being one myself, just in case you're more comfortable in communicating in German :)

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