"I Will Take Care of You" 10

Aug 30, 2008 20:30


Title: I Will Take Care of You
Author: Kida
Verse: Were wolf!Dean/Vampire!Sam
Pairings: Wincest
Rating: NC-17
Genre: AUish
Disclaimer: not mine.

Summary: Ok, so Dean may have been slightly presumptuous to think Sam had given in and things would be a piece of cake from here on in.

(note to readers- I know this is totally illogical and prolli wouldn’t ( Read more... )

werewolf/vamp au

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lunadragonx August 30 2008, 14:58:29 UTC
Since when has anything regarding Werewolves and Vampires needed to be logical or plausible. : ) Illogical and improbable don't mean anything here.

The only concrete things are one becomes a wolf and the other drinks blood. (and sometimes they can be debatable, depending on the source!!!!)

Dean drinking then Sam feeding off him works for me, oh yes it does. LOL

Another brilliant chapter, I feel very spoiled today. : )

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killer_kida August 30 2008, 23:08:59 UTC
well it's very true that were wolf and vampire lores differ from source to source. Vampires especially have such a huge range of what they can and can't do (ie- if they can go out in sunlight), what really will or won't kill them (stakes, crucifixes, garlic, dicapitation, etc) their customs (sleep in coffins or upside down like a bat) and their mannerisms (ie- how much will they have over their rown soul, can they really be good if they choose to be or does hunger over take them and do they just become blood thirtsy killing creatures without a soul?)

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trueshellz August 30 2008, 21:29:39 UTC
hey hun
your cut is off and its all posted outside it
please fix it

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killer_kida August 30 2008, 23:00:58 UTC
yeah, i know it was f*ing with me all yesterday, i've tried to edit it like 6 times. i'll give it another shot.

where is it showing up?

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trueshellz August 31 2008, 11:17:21 UTC
on your own page coz ive friended you
x

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killer_kida August 31 2008, 11:22:36 UTC
ah, i see.

well im really sorry, i have no idea why it's playing up so much- it only started when i posted the 8th chapter :s- but i promise to keep working on it.

have you been reading this fic or been looking for an update on another? can i help you with anything? :)
seeing my page is such a mess i might as well help *is ashamed*

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cats_eye78 August 30 2008, 22:49:40 UTC
Logic? Baaa,who needs logic? It's just Dean doing what's needed to take care of Sam. And Sam sounds like he's gonna man up and start drinking for himself. Which would be good, cause then he doesn't have to worry about taking too much from Dean(and I won't worry as much about their ability to fight off the other werewolf), but then again it made for hot sex.

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killer_kida August 30 2008, 22:59:19 UTC
lol glad you agree on the logic part, who needs it?

as for the sex, i hope it was enough since it's the 10th chapter and i didn't go into much detail. i usually have my porn author helping me with sex scenes you see but i havent been able to catch him lately becoz of RL on both ends.

anyways, glad you like it. funnily enough this was the original ending, coz i didn't bring the vamp and were wolf back into it, but i decided they have to face their makers right?

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cats_eye78 August 30 2008, 23:15:48 UTC
Absolutely, it would have felt like loose ends if you don't address the makers. It feels like the werewolf is gonna be a much bigger confrontation than the vamp was.

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killer_kida August 30 2008, 23:20:30 UTC
he sure will be, where as the vampire only wanted to put the Winchester's in the shoes of the creautures they hunted, the were wolf is going to want slow torturing revenge and he was the bigger and stronger of the two so yes, unfortunately dean and sam may not come up too well from this one.

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killer_kida September 29 2008, 00:21:28 UTC
well they're working on it, yeah. sam's gradually giving into it.

why thank you, that's such a compliment considering that's exactly what the story is about- dean's protective, ever giving, elder brotherly way towards sam.

yeah, sam didn't run- and they found a pretty nice arrangement in that as well that leave both sides pretty content :P

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