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[killeleanor]

Nick’s mouth startled open when Joe nipped at his bottom lip gently, slipping his tongue inside. He wondered if Nick had ever kissed like this before, because he certainly hadn’t, but took encouragement from his slight moan and eager reciprocation. As the movements of their mouths increased, the actions became more desperate, but not in the

Comments

[severus_falter]

YOU'RE INSANE. IN THE BEST WAY POSSIBLE. IDEK HOW YOU COULD HAVE POSSIBLY WRITTEN THIS MUCH, TO THIS EXTENT, SO FUCKING WELL. I SERIOUSLY JUST - WOW. WOWWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW. I DIDN'T KNOW I NEEDED THIS UNTIL YOU MENTIONED IT IN A COMMENT SOMEWHERE AND THEN I SAW YOU POSTED IT AND FREAKED AND JUST READ AND READ AND READ. THIS IS AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL AND BRILLIANT. I'M IN LOVE WITH IT.

[killeleanor]

KEEPING WITH THE CAPS LOCK, THANK YOU SO MUCH!! IT REALLY MEANS A LOT THAT YOU LIKE IT SO MUCH. I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY! JUST THANK YOU! :D

[killeleanor]

^_^ Thanks! Glad you liked it!

[archylou]

I loved reading this so much, great work! It was funny, sweet, hot and surprising, I have saved and am sure i will reread many times!

[killeleanor]

That's so flattering, thank you! So pleased you enjoyed it!

[adinasourisme]

This was impossibly beautiful.

I thought, at first, that you were just gonna end the plot with a mysterious merman falling for a random-yet-adorable-human!joe, which would have been totally fine. And then you throw in that AMAZING twist of them being brothers and it all just EXPLODES so wonderfully. It explains the attraction, the pull, the feeling of something missing...
UGH. This was so good.

And I LOVE Taylor being a mad sea witch! You are very imaginative and lovely and I expect more awesomeness from you.

THANK YOU FOR THIS, BB.

[killeleanor]

Eeeeeeeeee, thank you so much! Yeah, I wasn't sure how successful the twist would be, seeing as they're brothers IRL, I'd thought people might assume they were in this as well, but I'm glad it works. :D :D

[amberdowny]

So I haven't read this yet. I've actually been considering writing a Joick Little Mermaid AU myself for awhile now. Seriously. I just rewatched the movie today, I was literally going to start writing in the next couple days.

But since you did it first...if you'd rather I didn't copy your idea, then I won't. But if you don't mind, I'll continue to work on it. I mean, obviously it'd be different, I'd make sure not to copy anything other than the Little Mermaid AU idea...and I was thinking Nick as the mermaid too, but that'd be as far as the similarities went, I think (aside from shared elements that come from the Little Mermaid itself, of course).

So, yeah. Let me know. And in the meantime, I'm gonna read this and then leave a real comment. :)

[killeleanor]

Well, I hope you enjoy it. :D By all means, if you've started writing something already, don't stop. Maybe we could turn Mernick into a craze or something! :P

[amberdowny]

Awesome, thanks, I'll keep working on mine.

But yours...hee, Taylor as the sea witch was awesome. And I love what you did, making Joe and Nick still brothers despite Joe being human and Nick and mermaid. Nick's ignorance of the human world was wonderful and hilarious at times. You did a really good job with this and I loved reading it.

[killeleanor]

:D Thank you. I'm really glad you liked it. Can't wait to read yours!