my favourite place was me and you: chapter 3

[kikis2]

Title: my favourite place was me and you
Author: Kiki
Fandom: Glee
Pairing/Character(s): Puck/Rachel/Santana, Rache/OMC undertones
Rating: M
Word count: 2868
Spoilers: None, futurefic
Summary: Rachel is forced to leave the spotlight and return home to face the people she sold for her dream.
Disclaimer. None of this is mine.

Comments

[meagan4dominic]

Another spectacular chapter!
The interaction between Santana and Puck was great. I love how you've established the connection between them, in how they stand the same way and smoke the cigarette. It's like they're two of a kind, brilliant

I LOVE the way you are portraying Rachel. I love how you give little snippets of the glory she used to be and then you pull her back down to Earth, amazing

[kikis2]

Puck/Santana are awesome. If I could escape my Rachel fixation I'd totally ship 'em lol.

<3ing the comments :).