KKBB Prompt Fill: Touch

May 01, 2010 11:55


KKBB PROMPT FILL: TOUCH

For the KinkKinkBangBang Meme Prompt:
Wordy prompt is wordy. :X

Since Harry is notorious for getting injured and/or maimed whether he is and whatever he's doing, Perry usually ends up being the one to patch him back up. But, after a while, Harry starts to notice that Perry will place his hand on his thigh or hold his cheek in ( Read more... )

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violetjimjams May 7 2010, 17:12:50 UTC
I really like your stories (one of my fav KKBB authors), but I have to say your endings tend to be very sudden. Everything just poof, works out and often doesn't feel like there's been a real conclution to the conflict.

Just my 2 cents

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kikamontanez May 7 2010, 17:31:20 UTC
I know. I'm not really happy with the way this one worked out anyway and I'm thinking of playing with a little bit. I lose interest so fast (whether it be just because or time conflict)and it makes me speed things up just to try and move on to something else. It's something I'm working on resolving. I have a ton of long fics floating around, but lately I've had these snippets that need to be fixed.
Plus I was writing this with my son wandering around and he kept wanting me to open a new browser every forty-five seconds to watch Abby Cadabby (Once you have kiddos there is no such thing as an off-day. Even when you don't have to go to work that day. hahaahah)

I probably will only tweak this one and then future fics will have more substance.

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narumellz January 4 2012, 13:35:27 UTC
Omfg, I LOVE your icon. Hahaha, so amazing.

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xgraciela May 7 2010, 19:54:15 UTC
Aww..I'm glad to see a new fill from you!

Loved this :)

reposted for icon fail

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writerboy May 7 2010, 22:18:59 UTC
D'aww!

It does feel like this has more of a cliffie than an ending, but it still lives up to your consistent caliber of greatness! Me likes verreh much!

"You haven't touched me since our fight in the hospital."
*snerk* That's so perfectly foot-in-mouth/IC for Harry.

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mckay_ocd May 8 2010, 15:04:37 UTC
AWESOME! Awwwww bless their cotton socks!

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lady529 May 9 2010, 15:53:48 UTC
You haven't touched me since our fight in the hospital.

I love this line, it's perfect <3

Cute fic, always nice to see a new something from you!

The Lady 529

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