Wonder-Bar.

Jan 11, 2010 22:19

Wonder-Bar
boomtrack @ kiiteruno
reallycorking @ corkart
Homin; R (NC-17 for the art), AU lawyer!verse; ~7,740 words
Warnings: Strong language, sex, the usual.
Changmin takes a summer internship with the best laywer in town, Mr. Jung Yunho. Let's just say things don't quite go as planned.

AN: reallycorking and I teamed up again to participate in dbsk_secretgame's partner challenge. This was our entry. :D Somehow ( Read more... )

length: oneshot, genre: drama, pairing: homin, genre: smut, fandom: dbsk, & artist: reallycorking, rating: nc-17, genre: au, genre: humor

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k_chan91 January 12 2010, 04:25:33 UTC
SPOT, yo! ;D

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k_chan91 January 12 2010, 04:25:58 UTC
*dances in 1st place*

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boomtrack January 12 2010, 05:12:49 UTC
LOL congrats on first place 8D!

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k_chan91 January 12 2010, 05:24:02 UTC
*throws happy!cookies* at chu* 8DDDD

I love how everyone's entrances were so...um...um... There is only one word to describe this...Only one word in the English language...Perhaps a few in the Mongolian language...um...ummm.....

AWESOME!?!!??!? 8DDDDDDDDD

And I really, really, really, REALLY want to stick Junsu in a box under meh bed...Just saying....>D

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That's for making me fall head over heels in love with every single last one of your characters. You've done it again~<3

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reallycorking January 12 2010, 04:49:00 UTC
Hey you added that last line later didn't you!

Ugh also I'm just still pretty much puking with laughter over Changmin's dream asldkfjal;eijfaeslfj

"but this towel is too rough to use on such tender parts of your body. Let me use my mouth instead."

just dying forever lajsdfl;iesjflif MAN CHANGMIN YOUR SUBCONSCIOUS SOUNDS LIKE A BAD PORNO

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yuukihitohira January 12 2010, 05:02:49 UTC
BEST LINE EVER JUST SAYING~

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boomtrack January 12 2010, 05:12:32 UTC
Wow your ho icon is kind of hot seogaoihg :x

god I can't believe I wrote that dream D: It was like every bad porn cliche possible crammed into a few tiny paragraphs D:

Yeah I'm just a ninja adding extra lines at the end without your consent 8D

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every_journal January 12 2010, 04:56:11 UTC
Nice one! Took me forever to read though :P

I love the Changmin you wrote really much, so congrats on earning first place with him ^^
It was fun to read the little cameo's with the other members. But seriously who would sue Su (haha) for exposing himself? I for one would be too busy drooling to think coherently after seeing such a nice show ^^

I thoroughly enjoyed this, thank you and well earned I must say~

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boomtrack January 12 2010, 05:11:03 UTC
It took me forever to write it so seems like a fair trade-off. 8D;

I'm glad you liked it! lol flasher!su was so much fun to write, sob. I might try doing some kind of spin-off in the future, a little one-shot detailing some of his adventures in exhibitionism. 8D

Thank youuuu ♥♥♥

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yuukihitohira January 12 2010, 05:04:09 UTC
I love this story so much :(

And flasher!Su will forever be the best Su ever, just saying 8D<3

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boomtrack January 12 2010, 05:09:34 UTC
LOL I loved flasher!Su too ;__; maybe i'll write a spin-off detailing some of his exhibitionist crimes ♥

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yuukihitohira January 12 2010, 05:35:02 UTC
;_______________; omg I will give you sexual favors for lyfe~ not that I dont already~

AND LOL SU-BASED STORY :O

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papered January 12 2010, 05:05:53 UTC
OH DUDE, YOU WROTE THIS!

!!!

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boomtrack January 12 2010, 05:09:01 UTC
OH SHIT I DID 8DDD

Does that mean you liked it? lol ♥

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papered January 12 2010, 05:58:17 UTC
LOL DO YOU NEED TO ASK. <333 of course I did sobs I love yunho and his messy messy office but mostly I LOVE HOW YOOCHUN IS INCAPABLE OF PAYING HIS PARKING TICKETS LMFAO

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boomtrack January 13 2010, 00:04:19 UTC
Yoochun is like WAT IS THIS PARKING TICKET CREATURE THING. WHAT DOES IT MEAN. IDK I'LL IGNORE IT AND GO BACK TO WORK /TOSSES TICKET ASIDE

:| lol ♥

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