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Jaejoong Is A Douchebag. Part 11.

Oct 07, 2009 16:26

Jaejoong Is A Douchebag Part 11
dong-bang @ kiiteruno
OT5. YooMin, JaeChun, JaeMin; NC-17; bandfic, humor, smut; ~2,000+ words
Warnings: Strong language, sex. Possible dub-con warning for this chapter, if you read it that way.
Summary: A story of unrequited love (not really), blowjobs (cause they're fun), bets (okay, only one), sex (lots), and revenge (the best kind ( Read more... )

pairing: yoomin, genre: smut, genre: bandfic, rating: nc-17, length: chaptered, pairing: jaemin, fic: jaejoong is a douchebag, pairing: ot5, genre: humor, pairing: jaechun

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ohbangladesh October 7 2009, 21:30:12 UTC

lol first?

i have to actually read it but i hope i make someone mad by stealing their spot XD

ohbangladesh October 7 2009, 21:35:44 UTC

ugh cliffy. but good chapter nonetheless :)

boomtrack October 7 2009, 21:50:43 UTC

Yeah, sorry, I suck like that. XD

boomtrack October 7 2009, 21:50:26 UTC

LOL If I had to guess, it'll probably be yuukihitohira angsting that her creeper skills have failed her. XD!

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ayamefan13 October 7 2009, 21:44:46 UTC

ZOMGGGGGGG \will be back later lolz

boomtrack October 7 2009, 21:50:53 UTC

LOL /will be waiting

ayamefan13 October 7 2009, 21:59:00 UTC

-happiness- OMGTHANKYOUILOVEYOU. XD I was actually about to go to school, but ended up checking back here. XD But oh well. I won't be late to school.

But yes, this chapter is ♥. But now you make me want the next one right away. D: You really know how to cut it off at just the right part. XD

boomtrack October 7 2009, 22:13:02 UTC

LOL don't be late! ♥♥♥

Yeah, I'm an awful cliffhanger-abuser. :3

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boomtrack October 7 2009, 21:51:12 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it. :3 Sorry to hear you're sick! ;_;

keychains October 7 2009, 21:49:02 UTC

AIEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.
^__________________^
I am so happy, what in the world? I just had a crap day and school and I come home and look, look what you did. Asjdlkajskld, and yes, if you'd broken this part up, I'd certainly be one of the people ready to kill you. And then be so conflicted because if I kill you, you couldn't write anymore. And oh, I'm totally rambling, yeah.

I JUST- YES. I love you? Coherency is over-rated. This deserves a MinBerry.

boomtrack October 7 2009, 21:52:35 UTC

XDDDD Sorry you had a crappy day but yay glad you enjoyed it?

LOL if I had broken it up, it would've been right where Jaejoong gave him consent. Then everyone would've been screaming for my blood and it would've gotten messy, I bet. :/

OMG WAT I earned another MinBerry. ;____; /accepts tearfully

keychains October 7 2009, 22:01:18 UTC

DDDDDDDD: Yes, omfg, if you'd have ended it there, I can foresee an angry mob forming or something, rofl.

Now to wait until the next one skdjasldask!

Here, have a Pikachu while I'm here ^^

boomtrack October 7 2009, 22:11:38 UTC

LOL yeah, I was worried about my well-being, so I went ahead with my original plan with ending it where Jae figures out who's on top of him :3

Be patient! ♥♥♥

PIKACHUUUUU so f'in cute omg :3

milollita October 7 2009, 21:52:50 UTC

saLDFGALSDFLDFASLADSHKLASDHKFASDHK!!!!!
need to breathe first

boomtrack October 7 2009, 21:54:36 UTC

Breathe! ♥♥

milollita October 7 2009, 23:09:41 UTC

I re-read chapter 10 and 11 and I think I've calmed down a little from my inital a;lksdjfalksd-ness.

HOLY MOTHER OF COWS. I love love how you built up that suspense. I guessed it was Changmin but for Jaejoong to figure it out through feeling his face...I think that was epic. And the smile. Homg. Changmin just smiling at Jaejoong in a position like that is like a;lksdjfa;lkfjalksjfalksdjf!!!!

YOU HAVE RELEASED MY JAEMIN MONSTER. RAWR.