Fic: Force Of Habit 1/3

Nov 21, 2011 12:08

Moar RicStar. 100% less gloomy than the last one.

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writing, comics, x-factor, fanfic

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hyperactivator November 21 2011, 18:57:06 UTC
This make me so happy.

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kiev4am November 21 2011, 22:46:38 UTC
I'm glad! Thank you :D

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meghannibrooks November 21 2011, 20:11:03 UTC
Oh this is wonderful already and so in character too!

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kiev4am November 21 2011, 22:53:34 UTC
Thank you! I'm really happy you like it. It's only my 2nd RicStar fic but I'm enjoying the hell out of writing it XD

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meghannibrooks November 22 2011, 05:28:14 UTC
I've been meaning to comment on that one too. You're really good at getting their voices down.

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kiev4am November 22 2011, 09:09:58 UTC
Thank you! Honestly, it's really good to hear this at this early stage in writing them, getting the voice right is so important.

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asgt November 21 2011, 20:58:42 UTC
Love it!
And LOVE Ric in the hat. Jamie's not the type who, as much as he wants to, can pull off a fedora. But Ric in one... Yummy.

Seriously, this is great, I can't wait to read more!

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kiev4am November 21 2011, 23:00:15 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad the hat appeals to more than just me. In my head he wasn't going to buy it, but 'Star liked it so much he figured out the best way to make it irresistible was to remind Ric how much it'd wind Jamie up :D

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meghannibrooks November 22 2011, 05:29:15 UTC
I now want someone to draw Ric as Indiana Jones.

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kiev4am November 22 2011, 09:11:23 UTC
At some point in the writing of this fic, I was planning to beg the drawy people of the comm for fanart of Ric in his hat :D

(if he's Indiana Jones, does that mean 'Star can be the damsel in distress for once? XD)

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lemiserabelle November 22 2011, 00:28:16 UTC
This is awesome. It reads like an issue; I love all the little interactions between the team members during the stakeout.

TEAM HAT.

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kiev4am November 22 2011, 09:01:25 UTC
Aw, thank you! It makes me absurdly happy to hear it reads like the comic in any way :D

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kiev4am November 22 2011, 09:13:25 UTC
(and speaking of TEAM HAT, I have a longstanding wish to see a David Yardin cover in which *everybody* in X-Factor is wearing a trenchcoat and fedora XD)

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kiev4am November 22 2011, 09:04:16 UTC
Thank you! I'm having fun writing this one XD

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