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jeyla4ever May 21 2012, 16:58:10 UTC
Awww...perfect story for a perfect artwork. LOVE IT!

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myeverlovinmind May 21 2012, 18:50:19 UTC
Loved it! Wonderful! Hope you continue to write more.

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kickstand75 May 22 2012, 20:47:12 UTC
Glad you liked it! :) It helped to have beautiful artwork to inspire.

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kariesue May 21 2012, 20:08:06 UTC
I absolutely love this! It has such sweet moments between our favorite couple and you kept them very much in character.

I love the little bits with Torren and the beautiful times and thoughts they have for the other. John's little stories are a perfect addition and go along so well with the artwork.

I'll make all sorts of art for you if you'll write stories to go with them. Please!!

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karasel May 21 2012, 20:09:44 UTC
Very nice beautiful story and goes so well with the beautiful artwork.

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nacinom May 21 2012, 20:19:21 UTC
This is a very sweet story with a lovely tie in to the artwork. Carson is so evil for tricking John and Rodney into watching a romantic movie. That's something that would never work with my husband. Which movie was it, by the way?

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kickstand75 May 21 2012, 21:18:58 UTC
Jerry McGuire, Nacinom. ;) And now I have to admit....my husband and I went to see Jerry McGuire on our very first date in college....we were so broke and it was the only movie playing in the dollar theater. lol. Funny thing is, first time he said he loved me, he quoted the "you complete me" line, even though we'd initially made fun of it when we watched it together in the theater.

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