fic - the mind is a terrible thing to taste Holmes/Watson

[kichisama]

TITLE: The mind is a terrible thing to taste
AUTHOR: Kichi
PAIRING: Holmes/Watson
WARNINGS: none for this chapter
NOTES: E G B D F
ARCHIVE: my LJ and fanfiction.net
SUMMARY: ch 5 - Watson remembers a few things

He woke the moment Watson stirred. His back was in knots from his awkward position. He sat up with a wince. He felt a hand on his shoulder

Comments

[foes_of_reality]

This chapter was great! My heart broke around this part: “You think I don’t care?” he said, his voice small. Holmes eyes shut as he winced, all the anger leaving him.
“I cannot imagine how you could. You do not even remember me.”
But the way you ended the chapter was just brilliant! It definitely helped to heal my heart. I especially liked that last line - very romantic. Anyway, I am extremely excited for the next part! ♥

[kichisama]

aw, Thank you!! :D <3

It's fantastic !

[anonymous]

I really love your fic "The mind is a terrible thing to taste" <3
It's really beautiful, and so emotional. You write about feelings so well, that in some moments when Holmes was like crying, I was about crying too. ;__;"
But in this chapter when he kissed Holmes and said he remember him I was jumping from a happiness! :')
I really hope that you will post rest of this fantastic fic.

Re: It's fantastic !

[kichisama]

i started writing another chapter months ago and pretty much lost all inspiration. maybe when the next movie comes out i will think of something, until then thank you and sorry! <3