Invictus Chapter 58/59

Dec 04, 2012 17:25

My boys are going through a growth spurt and have been keeping me busy. I promise I will respond to your feedback as soon as I can. I love it, so please review!

Chapter 58 )

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darthyoungling December 5 2012, 06:24:16 UTC
The ending is so sweet (in a Oh no not Snape! kind of way), I like it just as much as in the 7th book when Snape tells Harry to look at him for the last time.

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a_s_s_e_z December 5 2012, 12:36:22 UTC
Your note wan't necesarry for my part - I can imagine you are busy.
And it's worth my time to write my top favourite author lamely
reactions. Say hello to Alan and Eric, please. And tell them they have
unbelievably handy mum.
For some reason I don't know the imagine of Severus's preparations
while Harry is sleeping is so touching.
How could they possibly return to normalcy after this? - this is
killing me. It is painful to watch Severus go. To hear his thoughts.
To know he knows about truth (fuck the truth).
Well... it's too much. I can't react. (He is dead ooooh, he is DEAD! SEVVIE! Open your eyes! I want you alive!)
*goes to weepp*
And that vomiting, why do I love more him for the vomiting?

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ext_1531737 December 5 2012, 16:29:45 UTC
Snape has too many potions in him to die. I don't think he will! He won't! Plus he's a planner, so he has backup plan, like that clone of himself. So, he will LIVE!

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zireael07 December 5 2012, 16:40:12 UTC
This chapter was awesome. Exactly what I wanted to see in Invictus...

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okavango_dino December 7 2012, 18:20:05 UTC
Remember me. Even if you can’t love me, remember me. If I die, remember me.

I have to confess I started sniffling and didnt stop for the whole chapter! :S The 'You did' broke me! He has to live!! He just has! :S

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