Fanfiction - Glee - Why didn't you say so?

May 15, 2010 21:14


Title: Why didn’t you say so?
Pairing: Rachel/Santana/Brittany
Rating:PG
Lenght: 3667 words
Spoilers: Up to Preggers
Summary: Something strange is going on with their diva, and Kurt is determined to find out what.

A/N: English is not my first language, so thanks to squire_conrad for helping me!

Why didn't you say so? )

fanfiction, rating: pg, fandom: glee, lenght: 1000+, pairing: brittany/rachel/santana, berrittana

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ashlessica1235 May 15 2010, 20:09:32 UTC
last line is genius! i love this story you never get this pairing

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kiarcheo May 15 2010, 20:29:21 UTC
I know, they don't even have a proper tag :(
Thank you for reading!

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perpetualblyss May 15 2010, 20:46:01 UTC
Good stuff. I'd love to see a continuation of this story or maybe backstroy of how it all started.

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kiarcheo May 15 2010, 21:13:03 UTC
I may have some ideas for a background story, but it will have to wait because I'm working on other fics and next week I leave for a month..but I'll try to come back with story to write.
Thank you for reading and commenting!

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nyafangirl October 16 2010, 12:02:53 UTC
Cannot believe I only just discovered this. Been searching for some decent Santana/Rachel fic for ages! Yeah, so Britt's included in this one, but I can live with that ;)

Loved it. Most especially how they were stupid teenagers who tried to make things easier at school, yet mature enough to stick together outside of school. Really hope you write something else in this verse.

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kiarcheo October 16 2010, 15:11:47 UTC
Thank you!
You're not the only one who asked for more, but right now I'm on a Pezberry spurt and I haven't time/inspiration for this...especially because I'm working on a Rachel/Santana fic for the femslash big bang. So if you're interested, keep your eyes open :)

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ispeaktroll December 12 2010, 04:49:53 UTC
I'm dying over the last line of the story.

Yay for Rachel/Brittany/Santana! This really needs to be canon. I loved the fic!: )

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kiarcheo December 13 2010, 17:11:21 UTC
Thank you!

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jt4702 February 26 2011, 16:28:38 UTC
LOL I liked how you pretty much used Kurt to give us a glimpse of their relationship.

I loved the progression of things... small actions that are odd, but not really very revealing until you put them all together.

I could so easily picture Kurt's astonishment over the discovery that Rachel lets Brittany copy from her test, but she never let Finn and Puck, her exes copy her homework. I love your reasoning for Rachel being fluent in Spanish :-)

The cookie bit was precious. Icing sugar with their initials :-)

Loved that Santana and Brittany both said berry is their favourite flavour :-) and of course, the flashback of Artie in the girls' washroom... I could so picture Santana's sexy swagger over to Rachel before she swipes her finger on Rachel's grape slushie covered lips...

The restaurant scene with Brittany's parents :-)

When they finally figured out they're together and the last line... yup, they know Puck so well :-)

Lovely story.

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kiarcheo February 26 2011, 19:05:15 UTC
Well, you know how much I love seeing Rachel's relationships through other people's eyes XD

Nobody could say no to Brittany, not even Rachel.
And Rachel would at least know another language, and since I suppose Spanish is one of the most talked in the US, naturally after English, it made sense. Plus, since she has been around Santana and her family since forever, she picked it up from them too.

Rachel obviously teached Brittany how to bake...not Santana, because it always end up in food fight, at least in my head XD
I could totally see in my mind the bathroom scene too. XD

Thank you! I'm so happy you like it! XD

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