Fic: Hearts of Three 2/2

Oct 04, 2009 00:32


Title: Hearts of Three 2/2

Fandom: Star Trek XI

Pairing: McCoy/Spock and Kirk/Spock

Rating: NC-17

Word count: ~3100

Summary: Sometimes two friends fall in love with the same man.

Warnings: Sad. Non-graphic sexual situations. Language.

Notes: Written on a prompt from FFN dweller winsista

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k/s, spock/bones, star trek xi, fics, nc-17

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kamiyo October 3 2009, 21:24:28 UTC
YAY!!! Finaly an update!! But why was it sooooo sad? I just used my last tissues because of you! Why not a happy love triangle? But still this story is as beautiful as your others fics. Please update again and soon!!!!

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kianspo October 4 2009, 06:07:01 UTC
:D. Life doesn't always end in happy love triangles. ;)

Thanks and I hope to be back soon. ;)

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rubynye October 3 2009, 21:33:50 UTC
That was lovely and heartbreaking.

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kianspo October 4 2009, 06:07:22 UTC
Thank you.

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slash4femme October 4 2009, 00:21:21 UTC
wow. That. . . I think you killed a part of me with that. So sad, hit so damn hard, over and over again. It was absolutely beautiful and brilliantly done. Your McCoy is dead on.

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kianspo October 4 2009, 06:09:16 UTC
Thank you very much! I usually prefer happy resolutions myself, but sometimes there just is no resolution.

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shagungu October 4 2009, 03:26:29 UTC
I've already read it three times in just a few hours.....
I loved how it was perfectly balanced -- everyone was trying to do the right thing, they approached nobility, and it still broke everyone.

I am very polyamorous personally -- and I always love reading Kirk / Spock / McCoy threesomes -- yet I could see in this story how it might not have been a possible outcome given how the characters were drawn.

(Then again, I suppose I can still hope!)

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kianspo October 4 2009, 06:12:55 UTC
Well, the end is open, after all, so I think we can all hope.;)

I wanted to explore a different path for once, rather than making it all magically all right with lots of steamy 3-some sex. Because sometimes it doesn't work this way.

Thank you for reading! :D

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noein9 October 4 2009, 08:43:18 UTC
Given how Spock's mind works sometimes, this must of seemed to be the only logical conclusion. The matters of the one must submit to needs of the many, and so...

But damn. DAMN.

And yeah, Jim, whatever, bullshit, which is why McCoy did not tell you.

And yeah, Bones, yeah, classic, yes, you're introvert and so is Spock, but yeah, sometimes you have to fight for what is YOURS.

And Spock- man, really? Really. Okay it's logical....but damn.

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kianspo October 4 2009, 12:35:45 UTC
And yeah, Jim, whatever, bullshit, which is why McCoy did not tell you.

What you said.

I know. I'm thinking of writing a sequel. I just don't see how it can turn out any less painful.

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noein9 October 4 2009, 18:11:17 UTC
Kinda scary that I can read your Kirk's mind. Here's how that conversation would have gone:

McCoy (after a drink or three): So, Jim, I just want to tell you that....um, Jesus, I...look,...Spock...

Jim: You guys should really stop fighting. Sometimes I want to bash--

McCoy: Me and Spock are involved, Jim.

Jim: Involved in what?

McCoy: ...?

Jim: (stunned look, followed by laughter) You're having me on, you son of a --

McCoy: I'm....I love him, Jim. (puts down drink)

Jim: ....no, you....what? No, fuck you. There's a joke and then there's a joke, Bones, so what the....no.

McCoy: (laughs very quietly) I am serious. So serious. Being with him is like...I don't know. He's smart, and so damn stubborn, and he's full of righteousness and ridiculous and so damn beautiful. I have never, ever felt this way--

Jim: Beautiful? Whatever happened to Pointy eared Hobgoblin?

McCoy: Weird how if you get to know him he's like an angel. But I have to tell you, that you can expect --

Jim: *punches Bones in the face*

Jim: *Hits Bones againJim: * ( ... )

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kianspo October 4 2009, 21:07:06 UTC
I, um... Er... Did we, uh, did we mind-meld while I wasn't looking? 'Cause it pretty damn seems like it ( ... )

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