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kianspo

How Far Is Near

Apr 03, 2010 21:23

Title: How Far Is Near
Beta: secret_chord25 , thank you! All remaining mistakes are mine.
Pairing: Kirk/Spock
Rating: PG
Word count: ~3000
Warnings: Language. Also, some truly dreadful poetry inside. *facepalm* Well, I tried.
Summary: Prompt: Kirk/Spock, first time. Kirk recites Vulcan poetry, Spock finds it hot.
Notes: This is written for aprilleigh24 in gratitude for her ( Read more... )

k/s, first time, fluff, auction, pg, fics

Comments 67

blue_jack April 3 2010, 17:45:40 UTC

Aw, very cute. I love fics where Spock longs for Jim, completely and passionately, and you conveyed his feelings very well.

easilymused1956 April 3 2010, 18:06:25 UTC

What a wonderful story. Both Kirk and Spock are in character. You have their voices perfectly.

They are passionate, and loving.

Nice job.

Renee

kianspo April 3 2010, 19:25:46 UTC

Thanks a lot, BB! So glad you liked it. :D

kianspo April 3 2010, 19:25:05 UTC

Thanks! Glad it worked for you! :D

lowcutjeans April 3 2010, 18:42:17 UTC

Lovely.

This warms my day. And you know I need it.:D

kianspo April 3 2010, 19:26:22 UTC

I'm glad. ;)

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lowcutjeans April 3 2010, 18:55:14 UTC

Best icon ever!

kianspo April 3 2010, 19:28:00 UTC

LOL. Spock is a badass. I think if he thought he might have a chance, he'd jumped Jim long ago. ;)

Thanks for reading, BB. <3

aprilleigh24 April 3 2010, 19:03:00 UTC

OMG I love it!!!

kianspo April 3 2010, 19:28:41 UTC

*giggles* You're the best. XD

aprilleigh24 April 7 2010, 04:32:38 UTC

No, you are the best for writing this!

This is perfect. This is exactly what I was hopping for when I gave the prompt. It’s delightful and charming and warms my heart, and I love it!

It’s one of those fic that I will reread on those days I need a smile- it feels like the story equivalent of a warm snuggly hug.

I liked the characterization and it felt true to them as well as the tone of the story. And the poem and the description of Jim saying it made me swoon (just a little).

So… thank you so much for not only writing this, but letting me use your very talented services even though I didn’t win. I think that I'm not the only one who benifited...

kianspo April 7 2010, 12:10:17 UTC

:D I'm very happy you liked it. :D To tell you the truth, it would have been written much sooner if I didn't get stuck with poetry. *makes face at self* Writing for specific requests is always tricky, and let's just say, I'm enormously relieved and happy that this little thing has fulfilled your craving. ;)

Thanks again for your donation!
<333

blue_meridian April 3 2010, 19:03:00 UTC

Wonderful!

“I’m telling this to our kids, make no mistake. We will adopt twelve kids, no less. We might even start with Chekov.”

And that had me laughing. ♥

kianspo April 3 2010, 19:29:21 UTC

You and Jim both. xD

I'm happy you liked it. ;)