The Prince and the Cat

Apr 30, 2010 22:54

Title: The Prince and the Cat (A NEWS fairytaile)
Author: Ki-el
Rating: G
Pairing: KoyaShige and a bit TegoMassu
Genre: Friendship, Comedy, Fairytale
Summary: This is a little NEWS fairy tale. And it’s got everything a fairy tale needs: three brothers, an abducted princess, an hideous monster... and of course a very talkative cat.

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haruka21 May 1 2010, 08:37:34 UTC
This is really cute♥. I love how you made it his birthday at the end.

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ki_el May 2 2010, 07:14:42 UTC
Thank you. ^_^ I'm glad you liked it. ^.^

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phyliss_chan May 1 2010, 09:14:12 UTC
waa~ this was very cute :3
loved trying to figure out who was who XD
The way you wrote really helped, it was quite easy to understand who you wanted to me which character :3
i laughed really hard when my mind found out that Massu was the monster XDDDD
And the Tegomasu moment made me "aaaw~<3". They really harmonize perfectly, mm <33
And lol for Ryo finding a princess and having 6 children XDD
And Pi is as Pi-like as always <3
Everything ending with KoyaShige happily ever after <3
Happy Birthday Kei-chan <3

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ki_el May 2 2010, 07:15:40 UTC
Ah~ thank you. ^_^ I'm so happy that you could recognize the characters easily. I was worried about that a bit. Thanks again for reading and commenting. ^-^

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eska1306 May 1 2010, 11:53:03 UTC
I totally love this fic! <3 Everyone is so much their usual selves, it's not even necessary to mention their names.
So Shige IS able to save the day (even if it involves a lot of failing along the way XD).

Happy Birthday Koyama! <3

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ki_el May 2 2010, 07:16:29 UTC
Of course Shige can save the day. He's Koyama's soul mate! XD Thanks for helping with the translation. *chu!*

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carmine_pink May 9 2010, 07:32:49 UTC
This was hilarious! I love how you fit in the personalities of the NEWS members. The charismatic crown prince, the gruff second prince, the clumsy youngest prince who's allergic to cats, the beautiful princess with enchanting voice, the monster who harmonizes well with the princess, and the talkative cat. XD Cute!

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ki_el May 9 2010, 16:47:53 UTC
Thank you for reading this story, too. ^__^ I'm happy that you could recognize the characters easily and had fun with this rather weird fanfiction. *lol*

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bellemainec May 16 2010, 10:37:13 UTC
this is adorale and fabulous and wonderful and made me go squee very loudly. I loved the tone of it, the little details and the way you did not make everything really obvious about who was what and why. I adored the KoyaShige....and I am with Kei - people who remember and celebrate the birthdays of others are wonderful.

Great great job, I really loved this. well done. A lovely example of KoyaShige (and the wish *flail* and the news member-ai was fabulous.

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ki_el May 16 2010, 17:58:49 UTC
Thank you very much for your comment. ^_^ The idea of this story is acutally based on a Member-Ai entry (I think), where Koyama tells prouldy that he knows all the member's birthdays. *lol* So I'm glad that you liked the birthday idea, too.

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bellemainec May 17 2010, 08:49:47 UTC
Yeah, I think birthdays is one of those things that can show you really value someone...although I am terrible at remembering birthdays myself :) My talent is remembering how people have their tea, or their favourite type of movie :)

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