[sailor fuku; the dying day part ii]

Apr 07, 2010 18:33

The Dying Day, part ii
Sailor Fuku to Kikajuu Izumi/Sakume centric

summary [AU leading from episode 6 onwards; an explanation] Izumi is haunted by her kidnapping and all those deaths.

Part One.

Background music/Inspiration Amelie 'La Valse D'Amelie Amelie 'Comptine...' Good Bye Lenin 'Childhood 2' Good Bye Lenin 'Father and Mother'

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the dying day, fiction, sailor fuku to kikanjuu, oh sakuma

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spunspider April 11 2010, 21:59:51 UTC
CRYING I HATE YOU *SOBBING* THANKS FOR BRINGING ALL THE PAIN BACK, DUDE. ;___; so morose and i thought i was going to have a bit of a meltdown if you gave this a sad ending too, but nsdfjkejkd SOBBING <3 at least sakuma lives in this one!!!! and you know i could totally, totally see this all happening. because she's still so young and everyone was gone, and i was SO GLAD and a little turned on that he got angry at her, and khdfohfdk poor sakuma-san, he cares so much and loves her so much and THEY WERE THIS BIG HAPPY FAMILY AND WHO THE HECK WAS THE SADIST THAT CAME UP WITH THIS LIDJKFKDFIFJLKF I LOVED THIS SHOW SO MUCH, and your fic really was like some closure/relieF and I CAN'T BELIEVE THE EMO YOU INSERTED LIKE THE DRAMA WASN'T BAD ENOUGH WHY IS YOUR MIND LIKE THIS.

in conclusion, &hearts &hearts &hearts and i hate you.

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khushiyan April 11 2010, 22:48:25 UTC

I KNOW I JUST COULDN'T STOP! I couldn't give it a sad ending, I just couldn't. Zomg Shinichi can do angry so well I die a little inside. *___* I wasn't sure if I wanted to put romance explicitly into it so I left it like that but oh I WANTS THEM TO BE TOGETHER FOREBER AND EBER! But it needed the emo, I think. I started to write fluff in between this but I kind of gave up since the eo took over my brain and I was writing non-stop for like two days....

I love you too ♥

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spunspider April 12 2010, 11:36:34 UTC
<333 I couldn't give it a sad ending, I just couldn't. PRAISE THE LORD. :p kjdfhjkds i just don't think i can trust you with my otps anymore! and kjf I KNOW, they're all GO for the romance, but the age difference really isn't negligible and like it doesn't even NEED to be overt romance and idek lkjke <3 lmao, i dare you to write fluff now. i dare you - GIVE THEM HAPPINESS. :p

&hearts jerkface. *grumbles*

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khushiyan April 12 2010, 14:46:04 UTC

I knowwww but I needed to rewrite the last two eps so I could over them. I just needed Sakuma to surive and fill the giant hole in my heart!!! Oh I shall try with fluff, though the age gap is killing me a lot. -_- But I shall try!

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