Supposed 5 things fic!

[khronim]

Title: 5 3 times Stevie and Xabi Broke Up
Pairing: Steven Gerrard/Xabi Alonso
Rating: PG
Warning: Uh... Look at the title.
Word Count: 2, 211
Disclaimer: Just a fragment of my imagination.
Summary: Title = Summary
Notes: For

Comments

[missski]

Why would anyone want to kill you? This was well written! I enjoyed it yes I enjoy having my heart broken, smashed even, repeatedly lol Lovely, horribly sad, heart smashing stuff ♥

[khronim]

=)) Thanks for reading! So glad you like it.

Me likes heart-breaking stuffs too. XD

[missski]

No no no no! Thank you for writing it :]

lol when you're a Kaká/Sheva shipper you have to learn to like the heart breaking stuff XD

[khronim]

=))

I like the kaka/sheva pairing, but haven't read any fics on them yet since I just got hooked on 'em not too long ago. >.<

[parallelkites]

So so gorgeous. I love angst. Meep.

[khronim]

Thanks fer reading. =))

[elynaz_sgxa]

I am going to kill you for this! Nah, just kidding! Oh...the agony!

I suck at commenting, so I'm just gonna stop! Have missed your fics! <33

[khronim]

Ahhh!! *runs* ahahaha.... XD

awwwwe. Haven't been writing since the big crash for 2 weeks!

[mira_miracle]

Come on, why should anyone kill you for this? This was a really good piece of work. I like the change in the perspective, switching from Xabi to Stevie. I really like that they still seem to get back together again after the first two break-ups, though the third one seems very ultimate.
It's great how you pick up the scenario from the first drabble in the third one, connecting them with each other, which makes the whole thing feel more complete.

One objection, though: In the third drabble, you switch your tenses rather a lot. Maybe you should read through it again, fixing the sentences where you slip into the past tense.

All in all, however, I really liked this and the angsty, heartbreaking feelings in all the three drabbles!

[khronim]

=)) Thank you. *bows* Glad you like it.

And thanks again for the advice. Come to think of it I should take a look at the tenses. XD

[rei_schneider]

Awww this was so sad, but I love it. ♥

[khronim]

=) Thank you.