Silver and Lightning and Foam (Stargate Atlantis)

[khriskin]

TITLE: Silver and Lightning and Foam
FANDOM: Stargate Atlantis
AU: Hushed and White With Snow
LENGTH/RATING: 697 words, PG-13
SHIPS/WARNINGS: Deathfic-ish * (Click star for full warnings)
SUMMARY: There's a ghost who walks the edge of the sea / In silver and lightning and foam / Singing songs of a future that never will be / In a voice that reminds

Comments

[kensieg]

interesting

[khriskin]

It's, hmm, I dunno. Not working quite yet... I think I may need to pull the second section back out into Atlantis POV instead of swapping to omniscient. *pokes* :P

This is actually a prequel (of sorts) to Hushed and White With Snow, so it's fun to go back and fill in the 'holes' in the backstory. ^_^

[kensieg]

wonderful!

[khriskin]

I think I have it now... could you read it again and lemme know what you think of the ending? ^_^ DANKA!

[kensieg]

Sure!!

[kensieg]

Oh yeah! this is good ready to post! It is a little unclear about who died but, I think if you clarified it you would slow down action that needs to be fastfastfast!

Oh yeah ready to post!