kho

Murder By Numbers Ficlet, requested by _shootupwithgod

Nov 03, 2004 01:01

For winning part 1 of the icon contest. If I had my paid pictures right now, i'd use my Ryan Gossling pic, but I don't so... oh well. LOL.

Fandom: Murder by Numbers
Title: Not Quite
Rated: R
Pairing: Justin/Richie
Synopsis: Richie tells his side of it, because things aren't always what they seem.

And sure. Yeah. Absolutely. But not quite. )

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arabwel November 3 2004, 13:45:53 UTC
Nice... very, very nice :) I like this a LOT :)

*huggles*

Am I the only ne who feels like comparing Justin to Sands? :P

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kho November 4 2004, 02:19:25 UTC
Hmm. I see more parallel's between Richie and Sands, actually. And that actually makes me want to write a x-over. LOL.

Thanks, glad you liked it!

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arabwel November 4 2004, 02:26:30 UTC
Hey, you welcome :)

What can I say, I end to see Sands as this social outcast-pe who got his kicks - even as a youth - out of, well, throwing shapes :D

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nan_desu_ka December 22 2004, 11:40:34 UTC
Ooh I really liked this fic. I'm glad to see someone else out there shares my opinion that Justin's really the manipulative one of the two. He always seems one step ahead of Richard, despite the fact Richard obviously has the nihilistic thing going for him. And I like how you wrote Richard's POV, too. You got inside his head quite nicely.

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jeruw January 9 2005, 18:44:50 UTC
yeah
this is how i see Richard
nice job

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_shootupwithgod February 8 2005, 16:52:03 UTC
BASICALLY LJ FUCKING SUCKS!!! It never sent me the comment to tell me this had been written! So I pretty much just stumbled across it now! Sorry I never responded!! NOT PERSONAL AT ALL, I SWEAR! BLAME EL-JAY!!!!!

But now I've FINALLY read it, and it's fucking lovely. The way you characterise the boys, Richard especially, is fantastic. And the push-pull of their relationship, the way it's both of their faults and at the same time, neither's. I love how Richard starts to manipulate Justin, and it becomes sexual, but not even homosexual. Like yeah, they're two guys, so technically it is, but that's not why Richard's doing it. It's purely for the sake, the thrill, of having someone, anyone, in thrall to him. AMAZING.

Seriously, this is really good! Once again, so sorry I never got to read it a long time ago!!!

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dejectedmadness June 10 2005, 19:13:11 UTC
I love it when you give me links to fics that you have written that I haven't, for some reason or another, read. This was so fucking perfectly Richie. Fuck, it was brilliant. It was his voice and his life and his attitude and it was everything that he was in the movie, but more because you always make it more. Damn, you are so good. Yes, I agree, write another one and make it slashier. Because that is hott. And because you do it so damn well.

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kho June 12 2005, 19:37:26 UTC
LOL. I'm glad you like it, cause otherwise I might be annoying. LOL. Yeah, I loved writing this, and I really really do want to write a smuttier one. I wish there was better fic out there for this fandom. There is some by the girl who posted right above you... _shootupwithgod, her's is good. Her Justin voice is absolutely exquisite. It's in her memories.

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dejectedmadness June 12 2005, 19:38:28 UTC
Hmm. I will look into it. Thanks :D

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