"Poor soul was too high strung"

[khiladi]

The southerly winds came tonight which was great. Considering it was boiling in the day. I sat outside at about 10 pm for an hour. It was great. And for an hour I was having that feel one with the world moments where life feels timeless.Things were just in balance it was a hot night but with cool breezes

Comments

[anonymous]

those "feeling one with the world" moments are grand :)

your poem was. depressing. write something happy for once.
it was still a really good poem though.

mwah!

[uglynothingirl]

sorry I wasnt logged in apparently >

[globox]

I am in agreement, it was a lovely poem but depressing. Happy would be a welcome surprise.