Huh?

[dancer1in1pink]

I went to do a massive Axel thing. This is what I find.

www.fanfiction.net/s/4821165/1/A_Touch_Away

Summary: Axel loves Roxas, but Roxas loves Xemnas, who only uses Roxas. Axel confronts his feeling and takes action. Oneshot Axes Roxal Yaoi. REVIEW/COMMENT! Please? X3

Wow, Roxas loves Xemnas. That's nice.

Comments

[wayya]

Axes Roxal...?

[anthraxpretzels]

You Rannnng?

[princealia]

...what the shit is that? xD

[anthraxpretzels]

An Axolotl

lol South park Mickey

[fenerkulesi]

Wow, Roxas loves Xemnas.

Really? Since when? ...Oh wait, it's badfic. Whoops. ;)

Question: If it's a oneshot, why does it have five chapters? Is it complete? Either way, the story seems way too short to do that plot well (assuming it can be done at all and still be IC).

[dancer1in1pink]

I don't get it either. I thought a oneshot was trying to tell a story in one shot. Like you have one shot. Not five.

[dancer1in1pink]

side effects might include goodfic, IC, low blood pressure, and dizziness. Not approved for fanbrats.

I think they were switching the last letters of their names to be OMG ORIGINAL!!

[cordyceps]

[eewitsanne]

Yeah Roxas! Go big or GO HOME.

am I the only one who thinks that Axes Roxal sounds like it will be the name of a World Power from WW5 or something?

[aluminumticket]

Axes Roxal Hetalia.