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[lazzchan]

I'd spork this whole thing, but I don't think I have the stomach to do so. GUH!

The random Japanese, the notes in it... and the next time I see something like...

Sora gasped softly in his quiet uke like voice I'm going to beat something. Severely and for a long time

Comments

[kurenai_tenka]

...slutty in a lesbian way..? o.O Is that like...short skirt, boob tube, fishnets, and a 'YAY FOR GAY' badge? ._.'

....the whole fic is pain...;_;

[lazzchan]

Yeah, the fic made me literally just made sounds of frustrations. I wanted to beat something.

[talim]

... "Kon" is blue now? Since when? Assuming she was still going with the Fanpanese, but just... no.

[lazzchan]

Her Japanese makes me want to beat her over the head with my Japanese dictionary.

what happened to 'aoi'?

[talim]

I'm getting to that point where, when you're starting to seriously study Japanese, you really want to beat everyone who butchers it in the name of sounding cool or some shit. I'd heard about it before, but am only just now beginning to experience it for myself.

-sharpens knives-

[the_big_duck]

I think "kon(kon'iro)" is "dark blue," but that doesn't take away from the fact that there is no need to use Japanese words just to sound cool.

[ckret2]

Ewck. I had to make a new sound to express the utter wrongness of this. WTF? I mean, just the ANs are enough to make the story sound utterly terrifying. I'm now wondering if, as a lesbian, I should be offended by the Kairi comment. Not that I'm not already offended just on the principle of it. Kairi =/= slutty, kthxbai.

Is it wrong that I really like the mental image of Namine in white fishnet and mesh? T_T The rest of the fic is horrible, but that...

[kangaroop]

*Laughs out loud*

Seriously, it'd be easier for this people to just make Sora have a gender change. *rolls eyes*

Or at least it'd be less boring than the uke/seme stereotypes.

I don't get fangirl Japanese. It's obnoxious and makes me feel frustrated when I can't understand what are the characters talking about.

I wonder how they'd react if I suddenly started introducing "Fangirl Italian" or "Real Spanish" in a story. Pretty sure it wouldn't be "kawaii" XD.

[yokobue]

XD! *love*

[yamikonumber7]

Seriously, it'd be easier for this people to just make Sora have a gender change.

Um. They already tried. It didn't work.

[kangaroop]

*Slaps self*

How come I didn't imagine that such a story already existed?!

That's the power of the fanbrat! XD

(Horrible story. But the sporking rules ^^)

[yokobue]

I love the Japanese world, but alas, I don't know much Japanese except for the random words I pick out in anime and learn to recognize. But I DO NOT, EVER, EVER, EVER attempt to randomly stab into my writing so I feel like a true "fan" or whatever. >>; As long as you love it, it's FINE. JUSTDON'TWRECKTHELANGUAGEFORGOD'SSAKE.

Also, slutty lesbian just doesn't...no. Not Kairi. And Riku calling her a bitch? I stared at that for a minute before my eyes started to water from the pain. TT__TT