Yuri

[fascist_]

This really isn't a rant, but more of like 'help me because I don't want to butcher this

Comments

[zombifiers]

TBH, I don't think you can describe the Larxene x Namine pairing as "sweet" in any manner, so I'm curious as to what kind of things you have in mind.

I dabble a little bit in yuri, and I'm more than willing to help, but I need a little more info on what it is you need help with. xD Smut, feelings, making it plausible?

[fascist_]

More like sadistic mental abuse/torture. I'm most likely going to make Larxene 'tease' Namine and make her cry. Then throw in a bit of kisses and despair. It's going to the pretty anti-fluffy.

[fanfare]

"Sweet" is most definitely not the word you're looking for with Larxene and Namine's relationship. Larxene is pretty ABUSIVE to Namine.

Good luck :)

[fascist_]

Oh, I meant short and sweet as in quick, not as in fluffy. @_@;

[____ero__sennin]

I'm always in favor of more KH Yuri, but I'm not entirely sure what you mean by tips. Just make sure you've got them in character, though, and it should be fine.

[fascist_]

I guess what makes a good yuri versus crap-tastic yuri.
I hope I get Larxene down, she's a mega bitch so far. D:

[osmandias]

Larxene should be a sadist, using both words and a few small physical pinches and, dare I say slaps to abuse Namine? Kudos for writing yuri - I do a bit of my own and it's nice to see someone writing it over yaoi.

Exactly how far will this fic go?

[fascist_]

I think it will be under 800 words. So far it's about 300ish.