Comments | khasael: HP Fic: Stuck in the Cupboard With You (Harry/Draco)

khasael

HP Fic: Stuck in the Cupboard With You (Harry/Draco)

Apr 30, 2011 23:12

Title: Stuck in the Cupboard With You
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~4,000
Beta: groolover
Summary: Harry and Draco lose a bet and have to spend the night locked in a cupboard full of Auror robes. (Thanks to twilight_tones for the prompt!)

Author's Notes: Once again, this fic turned out twice as long as anticipated. Big shock to no one, right? Written for leo_draconis's H/D Shared Bed Fest

( Stuck in the Cupboard With You )

fandom: harry potter, fanfiction, category: slash, pairing: harry/draco, genre: non-epilogue compliant, genre: unestablished relationship, era: post-hogwarts, challenge fic, fest fic, length: short one-shot, rating: pg

Comments 34

kayoko May 1 2011, 11:26:11 UTC

I'm glad you chose this prompt! It turned out better than I imagined! I loved Draco going through the pockets and finding weird things. Like alcohol. And a pot of lip balm, which may or may be not be decent enough lube. Sparkly lube? Hahahaha.

The conversation was amazing between the two and I really liked that you threw in the "Scared, Potter?" line. That was very cute. There's just something about connecting the past to their present that gives so much depth to the story.

Thanks for sharing! \o/

khasael May 1 2011, 16:12:54 UTC

Thank you so much! It was quite a bit of fun to write :)

(hehehe, sparkly lube! *giggles*)

kayoko May 2 2011, 01:00:23 UTC

If Harry spreads it all over Draco's cock, then it'd be all sparkly. SPARKLY! Bwhahahaha.

megyal May 1 2011, 16:58:34 UTC

"You wouldn't believe some of the things I've found in these pockets." I giggled at that part for some reason. This felt so...real, I guess, I enjoyed reading it!

khasael May 2 2011, 04:54:34 UTC

Thank you so much :) Glad you liked it!

talekayler May 1 2011, 17:02:04 UTC

Hee, I can only wonder what Ron will walk in on! I loved that they got the chance to talk, and the conversation was quite excellent. So like Draco to go through the pockets and keep most of the bottles for himself. Close quarters FTW!! \o/

khasael May 2 2011, 04:55:51 UTC

Oh, Ron is likely in for a shock :D

Thanks for reading and commenting!

nenne May 1 2011, 19:00:37 UTC

That was just lovely. A very plausible explanation to why they ended there in the first place and great development. :) More?

khasael May 2 2011, 04:57:26 UTC

Thank you!

...And I cannot promise, but I very well might continue this! After I complete about a dozen other things (including the charity fic I owe you....meep!).

hallowdraconis May 2 2011, 01:28:12 UTC

Very enjoyable read, sexy and intimate and sweet. Loved it!

khasael May 2 2011, 04:58:02 UTC

Thank you very much! Glad you like it :)