Exhibits Admitted Into Evidence [264]

Jun 01, 2011 13:53

Title: Exhibits Admitted Into Evidence
Challenge: #264, playing detective
Rating: PG
Word Count: 513
Spoilers: for KH 2
Notes: In which one of Sora's friends turns out to be pretty smart after all.

Exhibit A... )

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medomai June 3 2011, 04:51:40 UTC
Wait... What?

Please, do help me out. I love it, I just don't know exactly what's going on.

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mirrorbrothers June 3 2011, 06:18:35 UTC
Oh, geez. You're very kind, and I really appreciate it, and please don't feel bad for asking... but it's really awkward for me, because it's not any kind of good sign for a story if a reader has to ask that ( ... )

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ceylmallyn June 3 2011, 11:23:06 UTC
...for what it's worth, to play devil's-advocate a bit, I actually did understand it? I wasn't certain either on my first read-through, but then I went back and read it from the start, at which point something clicked in my brain and went "OH!" fairly early on. So it was a little tricky, but not in a way that was excessive for me. (Though, it probably helps that your take on where Roxas ended up seems to be similar to mine.)

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mirrorbrothers June 3 2011, 19:04:18 UTC
Well, that's good to hear. At least I wasn't completely off base. Thanks!

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