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[punjab_banks]

challenge: [195] chance meeting
title: wandering star
wordcount: 369
notes: alice and ansem, in a different wonderland. this took wayy too long to finish lol

Comments

[greedchan]

=O Wow!
I like the way you wrote her. :3
... I had so much more to say, but I think Alice stole my train of thought. xD; So, um, good job!

[punjab_banks]

thnx girl!
haha alice is the word, i love writing her :)

[iki_teru]

I have to say, this was absolutely amazingly like the Alice and Wonderland book as in; it took me a few times reading it to truly understand everything.

"Alice had a Wonderland thought" that was epic.

[punjab_banks]

haha but it did come together, right? i hope so! anyway, thank you fr the comment :)

[schizo_niko]

Whoa, super neat! This fits so well with the idea of Wonderland and I really love the way you wrote Alice. Nice work!

[punjab_banks]

thank you!