Comments | kh_drabble: [Entry 05] Can We Keep Him?

tunasaladsonnet in kh_drabble

[Entry 05] Can We Keep Him?

Jun 15, 2009 15:37

Challenge: [190] Liar
Title: Can We Keep Him?
Word Count: 327
Notes: Despite the summary and my friend-shippy tendancies, this actually isn't Luxord&Naminé. And you knew this crossover was going to have to happen eventually. Probably slightly cracky. xD

( It's a lie every quasi-father figure has to deal with at some point. )

(challenge winner), tunasaladsonnet

Comments 23

ice_kestrel9 June 16 2009, 00:19:44 UTC

I just got home from the movies, and I see this. Coincidence??? :D Another mind-boggling piece from you, I see...

Every kid in the world(s) will sooner or later come across a dog and beg to keep it. I think you've managed to capture that moment perfectly. *needs Dug icon now*

tunasaladsonnet June 16 2009, 15:31:53 UTC

Perhaps. *wiggles fingers* D: 'Mind-boggling' fffffff. Thank you! ♥

littlecatlost June 16 2009, 01:26:40 UTC

*flails and rolls*

OH MY GOODNESS! That had me laughing so damn hard. Xigbar trying to play the authoritative father figure (and kind of failing) and Dug's adorable words. Hilarious!

‘Dug’ nudged his snout under Xigbar’s other glove, hanging at his side. “I love you.”

WAH!! *flail* I love that line! I recognized Dug immediately even tho I haven't seen the movie yet (I want to so badly). I know him by trailers and some clips I've seen, but I'm in love with Dug already. Another amazing Tuna fic! Nicely done! :D

tunasaladsonnet June 16 2009, 16:07:53 UTC

o-okay blushing now. Tuna fic isn't that amaaaaazing you have been misinformed I swear. .///.

at_splicken June 16 2009, 02:28:01 UTC

XD At first I was kind of sad because it wasn't going to be Luxord and Naminé, but this. XD This is just too adorable not to love. XD Just:
“What is going on in here, young man?”
I'm having breathing troubles, which is a sure sign that I love this. XD

tunasaladsonnet June 16 2009, 16:58:31 UTC

I keep trying to imagine Xigbar saying it in his California surfer accent. xD

Oop, catch your breath! D: xD Heeeee, thank you! ♥

spoke June 16 2009, 13:29:59 UTC

<3 <3 <3

You smell strange, so I will remember you.

You! You just made me choke laughing, now. Omg. Dug and Demyx! They can pal around and be complete dorks all day long! :)

tunasaladsonnet June 16 2009, 18:51:09 UTC

Oi I need to stop making me people die choke laughing. xD ♥ Thank you!

Neither of them are respected by their comrades and are ridiculously adorable! It's no wonder Demyx wanted to take him home.

nicetoknowyou07 June 18 2009, 14:42:17 UTC

I knew it -- UP!! So amazing, so great. SO CUTE.
And and and, Xigbar does look like he'd collapse when confronted by unconditional love. :D

tunasaladsonnet June 18 2009, 22:17:35 UTC

Heee, thank you! :D :D

He would, the poor guy. He's too tough to know how to deal with it. ♥