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Mar 24, 2009 01:45

Challenge: [181] Watch
Title: Salvation
Word count: 144
Notes: No spoilers I can think of, deals mainly with pre KH1 events. Cut quote is from Watchmen.

( They will look up and shout, 'Save us!' ...and I'll look down and whisper, 'No.' )

yaoibanshee

Comments 14

oreo_81369_17 March 24 2009, 13:34:09 UTC

o_o holy crow~ i love these short ones that get so much across~ this was amazazingly written~ especially the last line~♥♥

yaoibanshee March 25 2009, 06:31:15 UTC

Thank you!! ♥

greedchan March 24 2009, 19:14:35 UTC

Aaah.
This one was good.
xD; I'm not one of the more eloquent readers, but this was super interesting to read.
Also your cut quote made me roffle. xD; *has so much fun with that quote ALL THE TIME*

yaoibanshee March 25 2009, 06:32:54 UTC

Thank you! The quote was actually the main inspiration for the drabble, lol. XD I likes it very much.

yaoibanshee March 25 2009, 06:46:57 UTC

P.S. - OMFG your icon is freaking amazing!! XD Would it maybe be okay if I stole it? You know, with credit and everything.

greedchan March 31 2009, 01:43:44 UTC

Yeah, dude, go for it. xD

nimoe March 24 2009, 19:45:16 UTC

The cut-line quote makes this perfect. :D

yaoibanshee March 25 2009, 06:34:38 UTC

Yay thank you! :D Just finished reading Watchmen so the challenge really made me want to pull from that. Glad it worked!

tunasaladsonnet March 24 2009, 23:28:52 UTC

This is terrifying. But you know, in a really well-written, amazing way.

*__*

yaoibanshee March 25 2009, 06:35:21 UTC

Lol thank you. Yeah, it did come out rather dark. Oops. >.>

hotasphyxiation March 25 2009, 01:36:32 UTC

Oh wow... this is really impressive. I love this characterization- the way you wrote him invokes such a sense of a hideously twisted ego, a mind immersed in darkness- it's so ridiculously perfect. :P Amazing work, here, especially taking into account the fact that you used so few words.

yaoibanshee March 25 2009, 06:38:01 UTC

Thank you!! It actually came out shorter than I'd intended, so I'm really glad that came across. :D