Challenge Post

[osmandias]

Challenge: [119] Hide and Seek
Title: The Madman's Calm
Word Count: 303
Spoilers: Pre-KH1, Xehanort before he goes diving off the deep end of the pool. I tried something a little different and wrote as someone would in a stream of consciousness.

Comments

[singwithin]

I really liked this. The way you described that bit of darkness gnawing away at Xehanort is a really good way of looking at how he must have felt, researching the sort of thing he did.. it feels like a really accurate look into his thoughts. The last few lines honestly gave me chills. :O