Logical Reverse

May 07, 2007 04:27

Challenge: [104] Wonderland
Title: Logical Reverse
Word Count: 264
Notes: Thanks to windbourne and crimsoncookie for the betas.

'Twas brilig and the slythy toves did gyre and gimble in the wabe... )

kashuarashi

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arclights May 7 2007, 23:57:06 UTC
ROCK.

Loved it! ♥

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kashuarashi May 9 2007, 01:50:26 UTC
Thank you!

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kavakavan May 8 2007, 00:07:47 UTC
HOSHIT ITS THE JABBERWOCK!

You win for thinking of the Jabberwocky poem ^^

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kashuarashi May 9 2007, 01:51:53 UTC
*LAUGH!* Actually, I've never read either Alice in Wonderland or Through the Looking Glass, but I have an illustrated version of Jabberwocky and used to have it memorized, so for me you say "Alice in Wonderland" and my brain goes "Rabbit, Cheshire cat, Jabberwock." ^^; Really glad you liked it though!

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lindskaba May 8 2007, 00:51:44 UTC
Yeah, that is one beast we would never see in the actual games... It would give me nightmares, let's not even talk about the little children. XD But yes! Brilliant idea. And you worked the bits from the poem into your drabble very lyrically, I really love it. Hotttttt.

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kashuarashi May 9 2007, 01:52:59 UTC
Yeah, that is one beast we would never see in the actual games... It would give me nightmares, let's not even talk about the little children.

But you can't say it wouldn't be one of the most effective Heartless ever! ^v-v^

Really glad you like it! ♥

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chesari May 9 2007, 02:30:47 UTC
One, two, and through and through the vorpal key went snicker-snack...:) This is awesome, and I LOVE that Kairi gets to be the hero for once. Great job!

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kashuarashi May 9 2007, 02:36:42 UTC
*grin* I aaaaaaaaaaaaaaalmost used the "snicker-snack" bit too, but it just didn't balance properly. ;)

Glad you like it!

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