Fanfic: Salvation Ch. 8/11

[kg1507]

Chapter 8

Lois was starving.

Her stomach rumbled loudly for the fourth time that morning and she fought back a groan. Her lunch break wasn’t for another hour and her pantry had been painstakingly bare when she’d woken up looking for breakfast. Lois didn’t fare well on an empty stomach, which was not letting her forget this little detail, and her sour

Comments

[irishunicorn03]

WOW! I was literally almost in tears reading that last part. That's was just a very beautiful scene.

And I'm sorry that I haven't replied before, but this has been such an amazing story. I really can't wait to see how it turns out.

[eternal_moonie]

What an INCREDIBLE new chapter!! Love love LOVE it!!

[call_me_cash]

This is really fantastic.

[babettew54]

That was wonderful... good job..!