LJ Idol- Chillin' Like a Villain

[kf4vkp]

The bartender has been talking to me for far too long, trying to reach over the bar and touch my hand or my arm, asking where my accent is from. Reeking of liquor, that stale liquor breath that you only get from drinking days on end

Comments

[myrna_bird]

You have created an interesting scene here. It really makes me want to know more!

[kf4vkp]

Thanks, I think you will really enjoy the other half.

[medleymisty]

Hmmm, interesting. :) Am eagerly waiting to see the other half of this tale!

[kf4vkp]

Thanks! Can't wait for you to read it either!

[kf4vkp]

Thanks! And I hope you like Banyangirl's! Hers is up now!

[tatdatcm]

I like the setting and the details you added -- enough, but not too much. The ending really makes me want to read the other half too.

[kf4vkp]

Thanks! I hope you like the other half too!

[dawnstar]

And now I even MORE want to know the rest of the story! :)

[kf4vkp]

I'm glad it left you wanting more!