two untitled fics

[serpent_849]

Better late than never, right? :P I finally completed my two fics for this comm. Well, I completed the Christmas one in March but I thought I'd post them together. I hope this inspires someone else to finish/share their stuff. More fics is always a good thing!

for the Age-difference-kink! Party

"... Okay, next ones... Pavlyuchenko and Ramsey

Comments

[zimena]

Wow, the first one is so interesting! I love their naughty communication and especially how Aaron changes opinion on whether Roma is experienced or not by the end. Also, I laughed out loud at the 1-1 bit, and how they're even in using vulgar terms after that. It's also beautiful how they seem to get closer after that, and how they seem to develop some kind of trust in each other after that point. As you know, I love when I can see such things in fics, so this is very beautiful. Also, so funny to me to see how Gareth is important here, even though he's not present... and Aaron's final remark about asking Gareth what Roma likes in bed is priceless, really :) There is so much story in just that line.

I must admit that this is a little strange for me to read, because I'm not that familiar with Aaron. I even had to look him up to refresh my mental image of him :)

So, I'll comment the other fic separately a bit later, ok?

Congratulations on getting this written and posted, btw! I was so excited to see a key party post from you!