[30-day writing challenge] snowflake

[keuriwoseo]

snowflake

lu han/sehun, lu han/jongin
r
au, horror

warnings: word vomit, character death, graphic imagery, stream-of-consciousness narrative, mentally unstable!lu han
a/n: this is the result of me having a criminal minds marathon at like three in the morning.

Comments

[exothermc]

oh wow i'm deeply scarred for life but i already am since the beginning so
the way you wrote this is actually perfect - there are so much errors littered in this story but it actually makes it more real.
a+ for making luhan the insane one. (it's either usually sehun/jongin so)
basically perfect.

[sweetricebuns]

i used to dream of luhan coming into bed with me unexpectedly before but now im not so sure :((
i really love this - kudos to you. all the errors made it sound so real like i was some therapist handling luhan, and he was dictating the story to me in this sort of creepy way. honestly who doesn't love horrific!luhan? like tbh he has this aura around him that makes him so apt for scenarios like this, ngl.

i have a feeling that the next story would involve me in bed with luhan and not in the position i'd like us to be in

great fic, great plot - loved every single moment. definitely reccing.

[mickota]

"do you want to hear a story? of course you do"

it's this line that drew me in tbqh subliminally taking away my freedom...and then, and then, luhan refers to himself in third person yesssss I likes thisssss.

"don't go yet, i'm not finished."
yes ma'am, sir, author. Author, we'll go with author so I wont feel the need to stalk your LJ. Oh, did I say stalk? I meant view. peek at. yes.

"do you want to hear another story? do you?"
how is this even a question? //rolls wagon filled with horror prompts over your way..

[yunjaepan]

that... was beautifully horrific. very different way to write, very unique, and overall very intriguing. I love the way you repeated phrases and just the way you made the story so childlike... yet the content was so disturbing? amazing. I normally can't stand major character death. Like legit if there's a warning for character death (minor is okay) then bye bye fic. but your title was just like: ughhhh please snowflake me I have a soft spot for snowflakes this title is so beautiful. and then I just hAD TO SKIM THE FIRST PARA AND GET SUCKED IN. I regret nothing and everything.

luhan is such a special snowflake