of magicians and memories

Nov 14, 2012 17:19

of magicians and memories

2seop; pg13; au/angst

summary: Like shadows in a faded light, we're invisible

warnings: character death, mentions of sex, general awfulness as always

a/n: requested by beefballs~ i'm sorry this is so ridiculously unrelated to the prompt OTL but i hope you like this bb~

Jaeseop used to believe in magic. )

what did i do omfg, jaeseop/kiseop, ukiss, request

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beefballs November 14 2012, 09:46:48 UTC
omg tasha I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY
ok um jesus christ
WEEPS THIS WAS SO GOOD
DON'T APOLOGISE OMG
and i could see the prompt in this, you didn't drift away!!!
hold on let me quote the fuck out of this because jfc how do you even word these things

slender digits threading in and out of crimson silk strands

A reminder, a little piece of his heart unknowingly sealed away within ink blots and post-it notes pressed into a rainbow and stuck on the fridge.

Ink trails on worn paper, scrawled between printed lines and snippets of conversations from long ago.

He's a mess of giggles and wandering fingers; tobacco-stained lips, and tendrils of stale cigarette smoke still woven through his clothes and hair.

delicate paper stretched over a glass framework

Curls and lines, cutting words deep into a palm rough and callused from years of gripping and sliding along metal bars and coarse ropes.

and askhakhfaf my fav paragraph:

Perhaps it was the fact that Kiseop was broken, so painfully insecure: a complicated, cryptic enigma; ( ... )

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keuriwoseo November 14 2012, 16:06:26 UTC
thought you wouldn't rly like it since confusing flow of story and general unrelatedness to prompt and all D8 but yay since you like it /sends hearts

rly glad you like it heh, had fun writing this for you 8)

ilu too ♡

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adridalcorjac November 15 2012, 15:41:53 UTC
So beautiful *dies crying*

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keuriwoseo November 19 2012, 09:38:54 UTC
thank you~! ^^

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zoroyohgirl13 November 15 2012, 23:54:33 UTC
aaaaaah everything you write is so amazing. the imagery and the story line was just GAH. flawless. and the line when you said paper skin over glass bones *shivers* so perfect

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keuriwoseo November 19 2012, 09:39:39 UTC
not really omg you flatter me ;~;
thank you! ♡

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xinhuiz November 17 2012, 06:32:47 UTC
the imagery is just oh so beautiful ;~;

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keuriwoseo November 19 2012, 09:40:01 UTC
thank you bb ;~; ♥

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silverstorm666 November 17 2012, 07:13:37 UTC
This was beautiful and very sad. The part that got me the most we when he was at kiseops grave, and we learned he was also going to forget how to read and write. He had so carefully kept all those conversations, all those
Memories in that book. It was probably one of the last things he had left of kiseop, but he wasn't going to be allowed to keep even those. Those memories would slowly disappear. It was heartbreaking.

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keuriwoseo November 19 2012, 09:41:02 UTC
yes, i'm glad you saw that lol i didn't think anyone would notice since it's kinda subtle.
thank you! ^^

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