SPN FIC: The Hours

[kettle_o_fish]

Title: The Hours
Characters: Sam, Dean, mentions of Hallucifer
Word Count: 3,572
Warnings: Dean drops some F-bombs
Spoiler Alert: Takes place vaguely in S7, after "Death's Door" but before "Repo Men."
Summary: Written for ladybastet92's prompt over at the ohsam comment meme. 
A/N: Unbeta'd because I told myself I was too busy to fic and then did it anyway.

Comments

[debbiel66]

I read this as slowly as I possibly could because I didn't want it to end! Absolutely perfect, each and every word, and it reminded me how much I adore fic about this show...it's been a while!

Please keep writing - I love your stories. ♥

[kettle_o_fish]

I feel like we've reached the slow part of hellatus, lol. I get soooo excited over new fic these days. I'm so glad this was worth savoring! <3

[harrigan]

... what debbiel66 said! Goes for me, too: 100% !!!

[kettle_o_fish]

Yaaay! Thanks!

[mimblexwimble]

This is absolutely gorgeous. Like Debbie, I read this as slowly as I could, but it still didn't last as long as I wish it had. Your prose is magnificent! Thank you for sharing.

[kettle_o_fish]

*blush* Thank you! Thank you so much for reading!

[quickreaver]

I read it slowly too! Isn't that funny? I wanted to catch every damned word. I loved the symmetry of Sam holding and not letting go, then Dean holding and not letting go. I loved the details of the mine; you felt there. I loved the word "Morningstar." I loved the passage "The tension of the past sixteen hours is leaving Dean like sand escaping a cut bag."

Let's just say I loved this whole thing, okay?

[kettle_o_fish]

I almost didn't even add the sandbag line. It was like, one of the last things I added. ><

OH, AND I STARTED WATCHING CARNIVALE. I didn't know Tim DeKay and Clea DuVall were in it! Eeee!

[quickreaver]

FINALLY! You will love it. Draw hearts around it in your notebook, I promise. :D

[kettle_o_fish]

Yeeeah, I just picked a hospital I knew was in Fayette and kiiiinda near Monarch. The only other one I could think of was Frick and I visited Owen's grandma there once and I was horrified. And I didn't want to send him to Latrobe because I once dated an EMT who said, and I quote, "I wouldn't even take a dying dog to that ER," and after my own dealings with said ER, I'm inclined to agree.

Let's...just assume he gets transferred to Pittsburgh or something. I considered life flighting him...but I don't think he's THAT badly hurt...all things considered. This is me being nice to Sammy: hurt, but not THAT hurt.

TERRIBLE PEOPLE, WE ARE.

I know! I know, I knew I was going to get it for posting this before that, but comment fic has an expiration date!