SPN FIC: He Tore Its Chords Asunder

[kettle_o_fish]

Title: He Tore Its Chords Asunder
Summary: It's always bad when they separate. It's worse when they don't get a choice. 
Characters: Sam, Dean, Jody Mills, a little bit of Frank, implied Castiel
Genre: h/c, season 7, probably AU after 7.16-17
Rating: PG-13 (language)
Disclaimer: Not my sandbox
Wordcount: 2,931
Warnings: Super major spoilers for the rest

Comments

[liliaeth]

I love that you had the cops realizing whom they were dealing with in Sam, or at least thinking that they do. And poor Dean, unable to just be with Sam when his brother needs him the most...

[quickreaver]

This. Is. My. Canon.

But on a less dogmatic note...

I could wallow in your writing like a pig in mud. No, wait, that didn't come out right. Like a hooker on satin sheets? Okay, better?

This was absolute wonderment. Second person POV is a TOUGH place to write from and of course, you killed it. I don't get all teary-eyed easily but you can pluck at my heartstrings like none other, and make it feel right. Not maudlin, not girlie, but so spot on for two broken men who have been through Hell. No hyperbole.

Cheers, doll. You're a star.

[roxymissrose]

I think I'd be pretty darn happy if the show went this way. Just like this, angel wings and all.

[borgmama1of5]

OMG.

First, superb writing, every word has been carefully chosen to construct the events, the visuals, the characterizations.

It should happen like this, because it is a perfect continuation of where the show has been headed.

And I really, really hope you are not omniscient because this is heartbreaking and I don't think I would survive if it went like this--I barely survived this!

[running_hot]

He’s drifting again, tears caught in his father’s beard like stars snagged in some god’s butterfly net

One of the most beautiful lines I've read in a while. Like, really amazing. The whole fic -- just aghhh. Straight to my chest like a spear. Really fantastic, terrifying, beautiful, perfectly written, just -- ahhhh.