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ketchupblood

[fic] Last to Know

Jul 04, 2010 15:00

zomg, you guys! I wrote fic!

Title: Last to Know
Characters: Fujis, all of them
Words: 870
Warning: It's been a while.
Challenge/Prompt: mission_insane Colors/blue & 31_days/donuts make my brown eyes blue
A/N: Manga canon (so Fuji has brown eyes)

( Fuji is weird, Yuuta comes out, and they have a food fight )

pot: yumiko, challenges: 31_days, pot: yuuta, fanfic, challenges: mission_insane, genre: gen, genre: humor, pot: fuji

Comments 15

schweinsty July 4 2010, 19:38:54 UTC

:D. That was ~adorable~. Seriously. I loved this. It's the best ever. I love the siblings' banter, and Tezuka's non-reaction, and - hee, just everything.

And Yumiko could tease better than that, he knew she could. and the 'I won't let you have Miyuki!' were just perfect. :D.

In short: You are awesome!

ketchupblood July 4 2010, 20:27:15 UTC

Fuji-banter is the best. I wonder what Yuuta did to deserve siblings as terrible wonderful as his?

D'awww, thanks. ♥

tacuma811 July 4 2010, 20:15:02 UTC

Lol, that was so funny XD
Tezuka doesn't react at all and Inui doesn't write anything down. Disappointing reactions from number 2 and 3! Also love how Fuji is disappointed when Yuuta doesn't notice. They start talking about eyes and their conversation ends up with Yuuta confessing he is gay! XD That was so awesome XD Syuusuke and Yumiko are just so awesome together. I almost pity Yuuta XD

ketchupblood July 4 2010, 20:28:31 UTC

Hehe, thank you!

Fuji's always disappointed when Yuuta doesn't notice. His brother complex is soooo bad.

You only almost pity Yuuta? xD

tacuma811 July 5 2010, 08:42:59 UTC

Yes, it is, he really is obsessed with Yuuta XD

Almost indeed, because I enjoy the teasing of his siblings too much XD

dhorz July 5 2010, 03:06:48 UTC

I lol'd. Poor Yuuta! XD
Also, I liked it very much that Yuuta was the last to notice the contacts, and that Fuji was really disappointed about that.

Great fic. Thanks for sharing!

ketchupblood July 5 2010, 03:15:22 UTC

Yuuta just deserves all the pity in the world for having to put up with his siblings. Poor baby. xD

But yeah, Fuji does it out of (slightly misdirected) love.

No, thank you. ♥

spheksophobia July 5 2010, 03:18:27 UTC

I'm surprised that Fuji didn't just follow Yuuta to St. Rudolph or send someone to spy on Yuuta in his place seeing how attached he is to his baby brother. xD

lol FujiMama's biggest concern is the food fight.

ketchupblood July 5 2010, 03:33:35 UTC

xD I'm sure he has. Yuuta must just not be out at school.

BUT IT'S DIRTY! Besides, she raised Fuji and Yumiko. I'm sure she's already figured it out.

dark_kana July 5 2010, 06:22:12 UTC

This was <3 adorable!! ^^
Love the Fuji banter. *grins* And Fuji who's disappointed that Yuuta doesn't notice..
Poor Yuuta... Being teased by Fuji and Yumiko.. *hugs*

You're awesome!! XD

ketchupblood July 5 2010, 15:43:44 UTC

Thank you! ♥

Their household must be an amusing one when Fuji's lively enough to tease and not drowning in zomg-Yuuta-doesn't-love-me angst.

Why, thank you