Lame title is lame! Yay! Also *gasp* a story that's not about Sweden and/or Finland! Written in all of about an hour when I should be sleeping (it's almost 2am here now and I have work tomorrow), completely unbeta'd, and probably incredibly badly written as a result. Oh well.
Title: Money and nothing else
Rating: PG
Pairings/characters: China,
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Point being, you have written another incredible piece and I have a hard time believing it's un beta'd. The two am thing makes sense to me though since the point between being awake and asleep is a great time for plottings ^^
I enjoy how you were able to write another side of China that we so rarely see. It's even somewhat close to canon from what I remember of the Christmas Massacre or whatever it was called. I also am really pleased with how you wrote Alfred as concerned for someone drinking in excess. Probably comes from watching England down drink after drink. Ah man, your stories make me do that horrible thing known as thinking XP
Keep it up!
~Katie
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I thought the Christmas massacre China seemed like more of a happy, oblivious drunk than a bitter drunk, but since we got to see very little of it, there's wiggle room. (Hetalia in general is a fanfiction writer's playground xD ) I guess I just don't like how China is a cheerful uke bishie, when he's so old and has so much potential darkness. And poor America, having to deal with drunks all the time.
Thank you so much for reading :D
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Sadly, most of us Americans live way beyond our means and we know it. *sigh* The amount of foreclosures is just sad. I always feel for the kids, though, 'cause it's not their fault mommy and daddy can't say no and went bankrupt. Augggh.
AGAIN WITH THE SERIOUS ICON.
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Serious!Finland ftw >:]
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*snort* and I blame American companies for the job outsourcing, not China. But that's another issue entirely.
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Well done!
I, too, will go with a serious icon...when in doubt, I always go with Buffy :)
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Thank you so much for reading :)
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