"It's a mini adventure..."

[kerus]

Comments

[clarey_h]

I enjoyed that! Poor Chris for getting kidnapped in the first place. Were they hanging round the buttie wagon waiting for him? Good ending too.

I'm normally a bit shy to ask, but can I add you my friends list? I've enjoyed the fics you've written.

:o)

[kerus]

Thanks. I wanted to give Chris some credit for contibuting to the "happy" ending. Sure he was the bait, but he also did his bit.

Please add me to your friends list. Can I do likewise? I'm a total luddite when it comes to computers so I'm not sure how it works. I only joined the live journal thingy because the LOM site was so good! *g*

[clarey_h]

Right I will add you after I post this comment.

If you want to friend me back go to my journal by clicking on my name under my icon. That will take you to my journal. Then click on my user info at the top of my journal. You will than see a block of six small icons. Click on the first one which looks like a a person with a + next to them. That will then take you to the page to add someone to your friends list (you can chose what kind of friend they are and what they can read on your journal) and you can add them from there.

Does that help?

:o)

[kerus]

That helps loads! My journal's not up to much at the moment - it pretty much consists of the three fics I've posted here, but I hope to spend some time in the near future making it something worth while reading.

Thanks for your help - when it comes to computers I am that stupid!! *g*

[tigertrapped]

Ooh very nice! Note-perfect dialogue and a gritty, nasty feel to it which was in absolute keeping with the show. Congratulations!

[kerus]

You're very kind. I'm trying hard to write it all out of my system so I can actually get back to doing my work....*g* - don't you just love it when something gets so under your skin you have to write/talk/think about it no matter what?

[tigertrapped]

Tell me about it! I gave a year of my life to another fandom - it's a slippery slope...

[kerus]

Ulp - a year!....and I can already feel gravity pulling me downwards...

[ginnystar]

Love eet! Dialogue on the spot and yes, quite like a mini-adventure! Even in that story I could pick up hints of Ray/Chris whether it was intended or not, hee!

[kerus]

Ta. I'm chuffed you picked up on the Ray/Chris. I love slash but can't write it worth a damn so I'm stuck to the vanilla (at least for now ;-)...) But then hint was there and you got it! (smiles)

[emiloy]

Gah! that was wonderful!! just like a real episode!!
I was laughing out loud at the funny bits and biting my knuckles at the tense moments! and everythign!! wow that was great!! just like a proper ep!!! I love you soo much for that!!!!!!
*bounces*

(also, my itunes is perfectly tuned to my brain, had a quiet lotr song playing, and then when Chris said "it's a trap" it went all booming and threataning!! and at the end, with all the Sam and Gene stuff I had "me and my shadow" playing...it all adds up to one great story that I'm going to go read again now ^^)

*is very happy*

[kerus]

So chuffed you liked it. I really miss LOM and just needed the fix you know! I tried to get everything in, including the 2006/hospital references that usually happen along with humour, angst and the inevitable beating...(I do so love Sam getting hurt!)without going on for pages and pages.

I love the "me and my shadow" - it fits right in. I hadn't thought about suggesting soundtracks to go with it which, now I think about it, was a big ommision..... any suggestions?

[soulstar]

Brilliant! It was a mini adventure indeed. You've got all the characters dead on, and I love your Sam/Gene banter. :-D

[kerus]

Cheers. The fun about writing this kind of fic is that the characters pretty much write themselves. The Guv pops up in my head unbidden with his insults ready made. I just have to edit them..... *g*

[soulstar]

Bwahah - I'd love to see the unedited version!

[kerus]

I'd need a lawyer present! *lol*