Home Tonight (Part 1/2)

[kerijane]

Olivia Spencer shut the car door as quietly as possible, exhaustion written in every line of her body.  It had been a very long, very bad day.

Leaving Ava had been bitter sweet. In the midst of packing and unpacking they’d had a great deal of time to talk, about life and love and their relationship.  Olivia had also seen it as the perfect

Comments

[anonymous]

Haven't finish reading it yet - so far I'm liking it, but I think you might consider replacing the word 'continence' with 'countenance' (very different meanings!)

[kerijane]

Thanks, just fixed it.

[uselessmarks]

So sweet and lovely. Look forward to part two! :)

[kerijane]

Thanks! Hopefully I won't keep you waiting too long.

[tanama30]

omg what a chapter i hope to read more. update soon

[kerijane]

Should be updated by the weekend! Thanks.

[kerijane]

Sometimes I think I enjoy writing fluff more than smut. It does have a tendency to make me resort to cliche though. :)

[thagreatgonzo]

Cool, can't wait for an update.

[kerijane]

Thanks... working on it! ":)